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IT IT resides there, hidden, beneath a corner of my heart. Sharp barb of parental growing pains piercing the joy of youthful immortality. IT took up residence on the day she nestled in my arms sleepily succumbing to trust, tiny hands clutching calloused fingers. IT has remained in residence, tucking more barbs beneath that corner of my heart. Footsteps growing up, moving on, coming home, asking: “What is IT this pain, this torment, of first days, long nights?” Learning that IT, the sharp barb of parental growing pains, has taken up residence. ©9/15/2017 submitted to – Fear II – Poetry Contest

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Date: 9/27/2017 5:59:00 PM
Great take on the fear contest - as a parent, I can relate. Congrats on your win, John.
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Date: 9/26/2017 11:19:00 PM
This WINNING poem is moving and memorable, John! Janice
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Date: 9/26/2017 10:55:00 PM
Congratulations, John on your great win.
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Date: 9/26/2017 8:39:00 PM
Great piece John you definitely wrote a winning piece with this.
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Date: 9/26/2017 4:34:00 PM
John, an awesome write, congratulations on your win !
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Date: 9/26/2017 4:16:00 PM
We all fear the great unknown, the things and circumstances we can't control. Such a fine job with this free verse selection. Congratulations.
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Date: 9/15/2017 9:23:00 AM
Excellent write , John! :) Good luck in the contest!
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John Lawless
Date: 9/26/2017 3:51:00 PM
Heidi, sorry for the late response...had a few "situations" to deal with...."oh those barbs, those barbs, those ever growing, always children barbs". Thanks for reading and commenting - always appreciated

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