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It dances deep in tranquil eyes from velvet plumes of ether's calm as soft as alabaster skies It softly sings an ancient psalm rewritten when the moon invites in lavender of evening balm It gently blooms with conscious slight in zephyred streams of fragrant dreams as lilacs waft the night towards light Upon the page, untraced it streams It dwells between the words – it seems

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Date: 12/13/2017 12:48:00 PM
Congrats, looking forward to "light".
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Date: 12/13/2017 12:23:00 PM
Wonderful flow in this write and the ending is fantastic, congrats on your win
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Date: 12/13/2017 11:57:00 AM
Nicely done, David, congratulations on your win hugs Eve
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Date: 12/13/2017 11:30:00 AM
Saved as a fave, David! Lovely images! Congrats on 3rd place!
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Date: 12/13/2017 11:28:00 AM
David, I find a whimsical metaphor for the muse playing hide and seek in the flowered scent of this nicely composed "Terza Rima". Thanks for entering the contest.
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Date: 12/29/2016 10:39:00 AM
Congratulations David. I guess you pose the ultimate question? Well done...
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