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Its shadow whispers to us from the dank caverns of our most frightening nightmare, having followed us since our birth. Though it often approaches by way of our own folly, it can also come to us, surprisingly, by mere happenstance! Like bats' wings, it flutters madly when stalking the sickly. Its horrible screams are wafting on ill winds of calamity. Where mud, soot, and blood daub the faces of innocents, its stench is at its most deplorable; oh, the horror! I pray when it captures me, it will be swift - that perchance - I will be taken whilst happily I dream. Jan. 22, 2019 for Lu Loo's 10 Lines 10 Words, Free Verse 1 Poetry Contest Theme #3: Death

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Date: 2/6/2019 2:20:00 PM
Back with congrats on your win, Andrea. So glad to see you in the winners' circle! Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 2/6/2019 7:17:00 AM
Congrats on your win Andrea..Hugs
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Date: 1/28/2019 10:01:00 PM
Wonderfully described!
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Date: 1/27/2019 3:11:00 PM
Dark and chilling, but composed so well! This is sure to be on the winner's list. xxoo
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Date: 1/24/2019 7:42:00 AM
Very nicely done Andrea..there is no escape from its scythe..
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Date: 1/23/2019 11:19:00 PM
WoW! Andrea, This is brilliant even though it's spooky and dark! I've seen these words before. You used them very well and penned a good poem on the chosen theme. It looks like a winner to me. Best wishes in the contest:-) Alexis
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Date: 1/23/2019 10:45:00 PM
"It" sounds like the title to a movie.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 1/24/2019 8:55:00 AM
Yes, IT was!!!
Date: 1/23/2019 8:33:00 PM
Nice, dark work here! If you feel like it check out Demon, Demon by Ghost Funk Orchestra. It has my poem with a musical background done by my nephew - who along with his brother inherited a lot of musical talent from their two grandfathers. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 1/23/2019 7:32:00 PM
I remember that movie well, It was really creepy, Nice poem Andrea well done,
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Date: 1/23/2019 5:31:00 PM
Most people don't know when death will come, Andrea. Although I don't think of it as a "dark" concept, I can surely relate to the desire to pass in our sleep. You presented great imagery throughout and I think you've got a winner! Best wishes in the contest, dear friend. Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 1/23/2019 2:55:00 PM
you have described this quite brilliantly, andrea!
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Date: 1/23/2019 1:27:00 PM
OOhhh what a dark write... your imagery was so vivid in this one!
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Date: 1/23/2019 8:29:00 AM
...and we will all have to answer to IT.
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Date: 1/23/2019 7:29:00 AM
Dark and gloomy--apt for the death theme.
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Date: 1/23/2019 5:17:00 AM
Wow, Andrea. A delightfully gloomy gem.
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Date: 1/23/2019 4:18:00 AM
A spooky verse Andrea, well composed. Greeting's from Ireland. Tom.
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Date: 1/23/2019 12:26:00 AM
'Oh, the horror!' Strikes me like Kurtz's words, 'The Horror! The Horror!' in Heart of Darkness by Joseph Conrad. A good read, if you haven't read it. Anyway, this stark and wonderful and painful and as clear a look into the face of Death as I've ever read. (And that's a COMPLIMENT!) Very Well Written. Deep and Courageous! Bravo!
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