Ism

Solace in solitude is not solace,
Yet solitude drapes around me as fog.  
It backs up against the yellowing pale of democracy,
falling to cries of ism.
Ism builds the bridge 
but passes nothing across.
Ism makes us all equally nothing.
It fills no gaps.
It eases no pain.
Everyone has so many rights, that no one has any.

Enough postulations.
Enough whining in the vernacular of drag abouts.
Enough hoping and cursing for the good old day, lost forever.
Infused in false hope and pseudo dreams
lying ever on the edge of tomorrow,
Swirling mists of anxiety 
float on the tongue of every asker,
of every question.
who, what, where, when, why?
Burying answers in a vault of hypocrisy,
those who answer preening their social feathers
puffed in pompous indignation
of politically correct double talk.

Words are expounded, hearts are lifted. You hear trumpets sound,
only the small child utters, “What did he say”.
And a child shall lead them.
“What did he say?”
And they all ask “What did he say”?
he dares not say it again.

Give me your tired, your poor, your huddled masses yearning to be free.
Not:  your poor tired huddled masses, yearning for all that is free. 

©  16 Dec 2010  For Gareth's "inspirational"contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 2/24/2011 5:54:00 AM
Charles,a belated congratulations to you in the contest of Gareth James "Inspirational". Love, Carol
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Date: 2/13/2011 9:06:00 AM
Well done ! you have gained a much-deserved win in this contest….best wishes….Syd
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Date: 2/13/2011 6:40:00 AM
Super congrats Charles on your first place win in the Inspirational contest with this elegant entry ... enjoy a super win and top spot for a top notch poem luv..
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Date: 2/13/2011 5:25:00 AM
it is impresive, congradulations. John H Loving III
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Date: 2/12/2011 3:17:00 PM
Had to add that I really enjoyed the final line. The very same words rearranged come up with a far different picture. Joyce
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Date: 2/12/2011 2:37:00 PM
Congratulations Charles. Your poem is indeed impressive and inspirational. Love, Joyce
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Date: 2/12/2011 2:26:00 PM
So GOOD! I hear the clarion call!! SO GOOD! yes, VENT, I just posted one of my better vents ;) Congrad's well deserved! Bravo! Light & Love
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Date: 2/12/2011 12:31:00 PM
Congratulations Charles, on this wonderful winning poem!! Excellent writing and inspiration. ~ Carrie
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Date: 1/17/2011 6:48:00 PM
You paint a brightly descriptive picture with your chosen words.
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Date: 1/14/2011 2:35:00 PM
Remember, Charles, that it was a child who spoke out that the emporer had no clothes." We live in a world of "false hope and pseudo dreams," and have grown used to the "politically correct double talk." Your last two lines are outstanding! Surely a top winner in Gareth's contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/13/2011 12:06:00 PM
bold and stirring rant with powerful use of words, tonality and phrasing, charles... the ending packs a wallop! best winning luck in the contest!! :) nette
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Date: 1/12/2011 3:19:00 PM
Interesting political ideas..Glad that I chose this one to read this eve..Sara
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