Beata Agustin Poet Tetractys

Isle Offering Rest

Isle
never
forsaken
offers sweet bliss
with serene haven of still clear water.
Welcoming midst God-blest replenishment
wondrous fortress*
assures safe
restful
trip.

*Psalm 18:2 The LORD is my rock, and my fortress, and my deliverer; my God, my strength, in whom I will trust; my buckler, and the horn of my salvation, and my high tower.

September 29, 2020
3rd place, "Double Tetractys 3" Contest
Sponsored by Eve Roper; judged on 10/1/2020.

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Sara Kendrick October 7, 2020 at 2:42 PM Congrats on your winning work. Way to go for the contest. Sara..I like the addition of scripture which speaks of your faith.

Eve Roper October 2, 2020 at 6:01 PM Thank you for participating in the Double Tetractys 3 contest, Beata, very inspirational . Congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve"

Anne-Lise Andresen October 2, 2020 at 7:51 AM - Congratulations on your great third place in the contest, Beata :) - Have a wonderful weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jenna Logan October 2, 2020 at 7:21 AM Congratulations on your winning write, Beata.

Linda Alice Fowler October 2, 2020 at 6:10 AM Beautiful Beata, just comforting warmth. Congratulations on the win! Linda

Susan Ashley October 1, 2020 at 9:41 PM Your poem’s spirit of serenity is beautiful, Beata. Lovely imagery. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan