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Premiere Contest WinnerIsle of Fantasy - Seashore Bliss


Isle of Fantasy - Seashore Bliss


Rolling waves that reach the shore
with frothy crests of sparkling white,
embrace the waiting beach
to kiss and bathe its wavy frame
of glistening, light golden sand
that hugs the ocean's end
along this isle of fantasy.

The roar of waves and seagull songs-
cool sea breeze touch of misty spray;
the sky above of azure blue-
white cotton candy streaked. 
The endless line, where sea meets sky,
that sets imagination's stage
to dream what lies away, beyond-
this picture-perfect fantasy.

Held spellbound by this seashore bliss
where hearts and souls feel holy, blessed,
reborn by its baptismal rite,
immersed in earthen purity;
the seashore is sweet nature's gift-
a glimpse of heaven here on earth.
along this isle of fantasy.


Sandra M. Haight

~1st Place~
Premiere Contest: Island of Fantasy
Sponsor: Nayda Ivette Negron
Judged: 06/12/2016

~Honorable Mention!
Contest: The Sea Shore
Sponsor: Craig Cornish
Judged: 02/10/2016
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Marcum Wong Avatar
June 17, 2016 at 4:37 PM
I feel this way about the shore as well Sandra. Congratulations on your outstanding first placement! A truly deserving win! 7 ; )
Gupta Avatar
June 14, 2016 at 1:32 AM
Congratulations on your top placement for the best poem ....
Medders Tobechi Avatar
June 13, 2016 at 3:30 PM
Congratulations on a first rate win and a poem to match,,,,,,,
Rodrigues Avatar
June 13, 2016 at 1:10 PM
Congratulation, Sandra, on your top win! Lovely!
Flower Avatar
June 13, 2016 at 11:01 AM
Simply beautiful, Sandra. Congrats on your TOP win! ;)
Scars Avatar
June 13, 2016 at 7:08 AM
Sandra, congrats on your well deserved top placement! :)-luloo
Misra Avatar
June 12, 2016 at 7:55 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful poem and win, Sandra. ~karam~
Smith Avatar
June 12, 2016 at 7:18 PM
Lovely images, congratulations Sandra....
Dietrich Avatar
June 12, 2016 at 5:01 PM
Wonderful island this is, Sandra. I would love to be there!! Congrats.
Roper Avatar
June 12, 2016 at 3:17 PM
Congratulations on a great write, Sandra, your fingers and bind are blessed. Hugs
Arnone Avatar
June 12, 2016 at 1:54 PM
Beautiful, Sandra. Congratulations! "a glimpse of heaven here on earth." -- save for pollution, sharks, poisonous jellies, rock fish and all manner of terrifying beasties.... ;-)
Haight Avatar
June 12, 2016 at 2:40 PM
Ha ha! Too funny, Tom! But, thank you so much for the 'beautiful' and 'congratulations'! Much appreciated. Sandra
Lawless Avatar
June 12, 2016 at 12:40 PM
Lovely write Sandra, congrats on the top spot.
Haight Avatar
June 12, 2016 at 2:41 PM
Thank you very much, John, for your nice comment and congrats. Sandra
Allison Avatar
June 12, 2016 at 12:37 PM
Many congrats on your top spot Sandra:-) hugs Jan xx
Haight Avatar
June 12, 2016 at 2:42 PM
Hi, Jan, thank you so much. I feel very humbled and honored! I appreciate you stopping with your congratulations. Hugs, Sandra
Raina Avatar
June 12, 2016 at 12:11 PM
Great imagination and a lovely write....congrats on your win Sandra!
Haight Avatar
June 12, 2016 at 2:42 PM
Thank you, Meenakshi, for your nice comments and congratulations. Hugs, Sandra
Negron Flores Avatar
June 12, 2016 at 11:47 AM
Congratulations Sandra on the placement of Island of Fantasy contest.
Haight Avatar
June 12, 2016 at 12:10 PM
Thank you so much for another fine contest, Nayda. I feel so honored with my trophy placement, and I appreciate that you thought my poem deserving. Thanks again! Hugs, Sandra
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February 11, 2016 at 10:10 PM
Sandra, Congrats on your "Sea Shore win." LINDA
A. Sharma Avatar
February 11, 2016 at 4:27 AM
Congrats on ur awesome winning write Sandra!!
Wigley Avatar
February 10, 2016 at 11:34 PM
Yes, Sandra, by it's constantly changing nature, it's moods, beauty and ire, nothing quite makes the imagination fly like the sea. Lovely write, well done. Viv x
Gentry Avatar
February 10, 2016 at 8:18 PM
Congratulations on your win with this poem. I was right there from the beginning. Excellent!
Callus Avatar
February 10, 2016 at 6:14 PM
I am reading some wonderfully beautiful winning entries, Sandra, and yours is one of them; great imagery that enriches this free verse. Congratulations on this fine win! ~ Regards // paul
Scars Avatar
February 10, 2016 at 5:04 PM
Sandra, I love this verse..."The roar of waves and seagull songs; cool sea breeze touch of misty spray; the sky above of azure blue, white cotton candy streaked;" Just perfect imagery and flow..Congrats on your placement :)*smiles* -luloo
Wigley Avatar
February 2, 2016 at 12:12 AM
Where I live is as far from the shore in any direction that you can get in England,Sandra. reading this more than makes up for it. Lovely piece. Viv x
Haight Avatar
February 3, 2016 at 1:31 PM
Hi Viv, thanks for visiting my poem and for your positive comments. I am so pleased that you enjoyed my poem. We live about three hours from the Jersey where we try to go at lease once a year. Sandra
Turner Avatar
February 1, 2016 at 3:20 PM
It certainly is. This poem will set you right there and you can hear the seagulls screaming and ocean laughing. Beautiful imagery, Sandra, and very well written.
Haight Avatar
February 1, 2016 at 3:52 PM
Hi Daniel, thank you so much for your visit and uplifting comments. I appreciate it so much. Sandr
Allison Avatar
February 1, 2016 at 1:53 PM
Such beautiful vivid imagery Sandra I am five minutes away from the beach and love writes about the sea:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Haight Avatar
February 1, 2016 at 3:52 PM
Hi Jan, thank you so much. You are so fortunate to be so close to the beach! We try to visit the Jersey Shore each year. Hugs, Sandra
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