Island of Fantasy

There is a place I long to be….
A fervent wish......I often see
Where I can close the book, take a breath
Close my eyes….and remember……...............me....
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Where  once again….I will find myself….
                    my forgotten self,  along the sea…

There is a beach of pure white sand
    An island in a far-off strand
Where I shall walk with happy feet
    Where tall palms overhead will meet
Where green and scarlet birds will fly
    Beneath a golden tropic sky

There is a spring, whose waters flow
    Along a creek bed cold as snow
That I shall drink with eagerness
    With taste of mint and watercress
To quench a thirst that I have known
    Within my very flesh and bone

I have a world in which to roam
    A tree a thousand miles from home
That I have never even seen
    And yet I know it's branches green
Will give me shade some happy day
    Beside a lake long miles away

My wish foretells a longing fate
And so I'll bide my time and wait

                         ~

There is a place I long to be….
Where I can close the book, take a breath
Close my eyes….and remember……
                                                           me…..


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For Contest: Island of Fantasy
Sponsor: Nayda Ivette Negron
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Guzzi Avatar
March 11, 2014 at 7:25 PM
So true, there are few places to be oneself and they are precious. Congrad's on your Light & Love
Van Akkeren Avatar
March 10, 2014 at 9:10 PM
A beautiful and serene inner sanctuary you describe...may you always find peace there. Congratulations on your win
Gildersleeve Avatar
March 10, 2014 at 5:06 PM
A brilliant write Carrie. The "Island of me", we should all find a place like this within. I love " taste of mint and watercress to quench a thirst that I have known within" wonderfully written. Congratulations on your well deserved win - Connie
Wilson Avatar
March 10, 2014 at 12:57 PM
Ah such lovely thoughts about a lovely place! Congrats on your win Carrie !
Flach Avatar
March 10, 2014 at 11:30 AM
Ah yes, the paradise in my mind. I hope, someday, you find your island and there, find yourself. Beautiful poem, beautiful thoughts. Joe
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March 10, 2014 at 10:34 AM
Such a beauty should manifest... I enjoyed my visit Carrie and congratulations on the win... Verlena
Britt Avatar
March 10, 2014 at 10:13 AM
Carrie. What a truly beautiful poem. Your are deservedly number one and I am happy to add this to my favs. CTB
Banner Avatar
March 10, 2014 at 7:52 AM
Very well done!
Gorelick Avatar
March 10, 2014 at 7:24 AM
One of my very favorites from you...well done my dear. BG
Hamilton Avatar
March 10, 2014 at 6:38 AM
superb Carrie big congrats on win hugs
Gildersleeve Avatar
June 25, 2013 at 7:20 AM
Carrie congratulation on this superb win. Connie
Maharaj Avatar
June 24, 2013 at 12:36 AM
Stunning poem. Congrats on the win :)
Iqbal Avatar
June 23, 2013 at 5:46 PM
Its an honor to be placed next to you.Congrats on your win :)
Posey Avatar
June 23, 2013 at 11:08 AM
Carrie, my appreciation of your mastery of our craft just grows and grows. This entry far outclasses anything in the list of winners. Congratulations.... Jake
Dietrich Avatar
June 23, 2013 at 12:22 AM
well, here I am two years later and saying again. Congratulations on your well deserved win!! Top of the list!
A  Avatar
June 22, 2013 at 9:54 PM
Carrie, your poem was perfect. Thank you very much :-) Congratulations on your wonderful win~ LOVE~ SKAT.
Brown Avatar
October 24, 2011 at 7:45 AM
Congratulations on your win in Linda-Marie's "Bell, Book, and Candle" contest Carrie. Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
October 23, 2011 at 9:45 PM
But I'm not complaining! Just want you to know how much I loved yours!
Dietrich Avatar
October 23, 2011 at 9:45 PM
gosh, another stunning one. I can't believe I got my silliness placed so high next to ones like yours and Nette's. Simply outstanding work, Carrie. Congratulations.
Foster Avatar
October 23, 2011 at 8:15 PM
I love the flow and the content of this excellent work Carrie. Your beginning and ending tie it all together beautifully. Well done in the contest... cheers Margaret
Johnson Avatar
October 23, 2011 at 6:57 PM
Congratulations Carrie on your lovely poem and great win. Love, Joyce
Freeman Avatar
October 23, 2011 at 6:05 PM
Beautiful aspiration Carrie, Worthy of all honor. Agape, Moses
Sweetheart Avatar
October 23, 2011 at 5:39 PM
Congrats Carrie on sweet success in my contest with this dazzling delight luv...
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October 8, 2011 at 4:09 PM
superb........... hmm i am almost short of words.......... cool.. there is a saying that goes this way"if wishes where horses,beggars would ride on them"..we need to walk towards our dreams to make them a reality......
Ginn Avatar
October 8, 2011 at 2:08 PM
You are always a remembered smile
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