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Return to me

by: Dan Gerhartz

The clear celestial sky, so inviting this night. Walking among the clumps of marram grass Along the dunes and sandy beach, so lit up white Wind embraces the seas briny scent and weaves into auburn long wavy hair, a playful tangled mass, and dress like ship-sail; skin tight. The sweet silhouettes lit bright by the moon. I watch her from a far as she walks along the beach. She has become an island of sadness. A recluse in darken world and countless enclosing nights as the world runs aimless. 3/2/2023

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Date: 4/3/2023 4:31:00 PM
Eve, wonderful writing and thank you for sharing your poem in my Writing Challenge congratulations ! Love the image !
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Date: 3/9/2023 12:50:00 PM
Truly a melancholy picture of pensive wandering Eve. Congratulations on your win dear friend. Blessings of refreshment during Lent!
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Date: 3/8/2023 12:06:00 PM
Congratulations on this winning work for the contest. It is a good work and I enjoyed reading it. Thank you for sharing. Sara
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Date: 3/8/2023 11:21:00 AM
Congratulations on your top winning placement dear, Eve. Wish you always the best my friend.
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Date: 3/8/2023 10:04:00 AM
Beautiful imagery, congratulations on your win
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Date: 3/8/2023 8:02:00 AM
Congratulations to wtn on this wonderful poem. I am charmed
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Date: 3/5/2023 2:38:00 AM
A beautiful poem of sadness with a lovely image. There are many like her who are islands of sadness. Congratulations on your win dear Eve
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Date: 3/5/2023 2:35:00 AM
Congratulations on this winning work. I like the imaginative lines penned about the picture. Way to go. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page to let me know I placed. Sara
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Date: 3/3/2023 7:20:00 PM
Eve, I love poems written about a painting and this is lovely. Congratulations on your success in Constance’s contest… Belle
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Date: 3/3/2023 8:56:00 AM
A beautiful melancholy poem that took me away Eve! Delightful….Debx
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Date: 3/3/2023 6:38:00 AM
I think this is an awesome write, Eve. A pleasure to read:)
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Date: 3/2/2023 10:55:00 PM
Loved your metaphoric poem. Even though it's sad, a great poem. Hugs.
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