Isaiah Premiere Contest Winner

I believe I am born again...
There is nothing extraordinary,
just an uncle's old ramshackle house
with the only difference being
it is on an island in the middle of a lake
where I camped and fished as a boy
It is a small lake, full of brim and bass
The island is very tiny...

A usual gathering of friends and family
Normal everyday conversation
A cousin gets up for a drink and a snack
(Yes, yes of course he does!)
People talking and joking in the kitchen
Not important the general subject
or even who they are; it does not apply
I am there strictly to listen and observe
with senses amplified ad-infinity...

Flash. I am outside
I notice colors, shapes and sounds
thousands of times more vivid and sharp
though numbers no longer exist because
there is nothing to count or measure;
no clocks ticking to keep time
because there is no time to keep
No future, no past, only the Now
Only the perfect and eternal Present...

Flash. I am on the opposite bank
Fish hover, dart and fly in crystal waters
yet it is not water and they are not fish
Birds that are not birds swim in rippled air
The earth I stand on is no longer earth 
nor is anything or anyone else
because nothing has a name...

Flash. It seems
good and evil and all in between are no more
because there is no thought or opinion
Every action, movement, voice and word
makes pure and absolute sense
and my immortal mind simply sucks it all in
but is never filled...
   
Isaiah is this the prophecy
Is this a glimpse of that realm;
that realm where the wolf dwells with the lamb
where the child plays at the pit of the viper
The child, the child....who is that child
that little child who shall lead them?
That chosen child, is this that child
that child of...

Oh Isaiah, Isaiah
I believe I am born again

*Revelation Chapter 20, Isaiah Chapter 11: 6-9
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Date: 11/8/2016 8:28:00 AM
Hi Tim, Congratulations on your fine win: -) Alexis
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Date: 11/7/2016 9:38:00 PM
Tim, wonderful write congratulations on your win Hugs Eve
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Date: 11/7/2016 7:54:00 PM
Tim, congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderfully penned poem ~
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Date: 11/8/2016 12:42:00 AM
Thank you SO much Constance!
Date: 11/6/2016 10:38:00 AM
a timeless, spirited poem, tim... warm congrats on your win.. i hail you..huggs
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Date: 6/30/2016 6:28:00 AM
Way to go, I can see why this one was chosen.
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Date: 6/29/2016 7:54:00 PM
Tim, congratulations on your Trophy First Place win in Catie's Premiere Contest for your amazing poem! Profound and wonderfully written. Sandra
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Date: 4/25/2016 8:23:00 AM
Hi Tim. Congrats for your placement in the contest!!! ;-)
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Date: 12/3/2015 12:14:00 AM
Congrats! Creative. I liked it a lot!
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Date: 12/2/2015 11:51:00 PM
Tim, Congratulations on your wonderful win. LUV **SKAT**
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Date: 12/2/2015 10:35:00 PM
Wonderful write Tim! Congrats on superb win!!
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Date: 12/2/2015 4:58:00 PM
Tim, congratulations on your winning write:-) Alexis
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Date: 12/2/2015 3:34:00 PM
Imagery glowing in divinity and color! Congrats for your WIN in the contest, Tim! ;-)
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Date: 12/2/2015 12:36:00 PM
Congratulations on the placement of the contest Tim.
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Date: 12/2/2015 9:09:00 AM
Congrats on your win and thank you for participating in my contest -lu
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Date: 9/16/2015 1:09:00 AM
Wonderful poem n win Tim! Big congrats!
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Date: 9/15/2015 7:34:00 PM
Still love this one, Tim. No wonder it wins again and again. To me, the true, essential you writes here.
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Date: 9/15/2015 5:46:00 PM
Tim, this was a unique approach to the eternity contest, and it worked! Congrats on your win :)
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Date: 8/13/2015 1:21:00 AM
TIM, Congratulations on your win. SKAT LOVE
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Date: 8/13/2015 12:57:00 AM
Congrats on ur awesome winning write Tim!
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Date: 8/12/2015 5:16:00 PM
Tim, Congratulations on your "Any Poem #33" contest win. Thank you for the support. Stop by my latest blog. **A Good Read** if you'd like or have time... Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 5/25/2015 5:48:00 PM
TIM, CONGRATS ON YOUR BIG DEAL WIN. ALWAYS ~LINDA~
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Date: 5/25/2015 2:29:00 PM
Nice win, Tim. Sk
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Date: 5/25/2015 10:44:00 AM
Fabulous idea Tim....I remember when I was young we would go to Awana...half the night was athletic games the other half learning the Bible...it was a great experience. even though most of the boys were there for the games we got so much out of the other half
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Date: 5/25/2015 9:37:00 AM
great idea Tim - congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/7/2014 3:24:00 PM
Very nice one Tim. Congratulations
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