Is Love Really a Letter

This is my love letter 2 u
Devan I feel u like words from heaven
I love your smile this 
I know cause I have travel 
miles 2 see u smile
U make me feel like a child 
so innocent and proud
Everyday I want 2 scream it out loud
I know this rain cloud that hang over us 
is a test because I know I'm bless 
when I look into your eyes
The name I know the best is yours 
it doesn't matter about the rest when
I lye on your chest finally knowing
my heart is at rest,
I am human I will have flaws and 
I will make mistakes but these mistakes 
we must shake for our loves sake
I feel your pain for I have cause it 
but I feel it so deep in my sleep 
and even when I speak I love u and no one else 
but u must know i felt the day u truly left
I never though u would take that step,
but I knew it when my heart weeped
My love 4 u flows longer than any river....
this I know because my heart began to shiver 
when u walked I feel like I lost your heart and soul
this is what my heart use  to hold,
but me being so bold let u slip though the tips of 
my finger so coldly that my soul won't forgive me
Devan I love u and Its sad 2 
say I lost my chance with god gift from heaven!!!!! U Devan

Copyright © | Year Posted 2007



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Date: 6/18/2016 9:53:00 AM
KARIN, nicely penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. Luv **SKAT**
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Date: 6/19/2011 2:53:00 PM
Great heartfelt poem .Karin . I would like to see it all written in with words that would make it even better.Anne
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