Is It Spring Yet?

The March madness ends
I am just an April fool
looking for sunshine
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Kendrick Avatar
October 4, 2009 at 11:27 PM
We all love the spring. You have made this very readable. Keep writing. Sara
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July 18, 2009 at 4:58 PM
Missed seeing your writing here at the Soup. I hope things are going well for you. Hoping to see you back here soon. Take care, Karen
Mason Avatar
April 15, 2009 at 9:08 AM
This is still soooooooooooooooooo awesome!! ... smile ... WOW, what a Christmas present you were ... LOL ... 12/24 indeed but it must of been kind of hard growing up because did you get a birthday too? The day before Xmas must have made it hard to have a separate party!! Thanks for getting back to me Robin and for being at the Soup!!
Mason Avatar
April 9, 2009 at 12:25 PM
Absolutely PERFECT ... what a great Senryu this is, Robin. I've got to add this to my favorite list ... its a keeper ... smile
Ehigiator Avatar
April 7, 2009 at 12:04 AM
I know what you mean, It was so hot today and yesterday- we had four fans going...Yet a few days ago, I woke up and it was raining..I was like um what's going on here? You never know what the weather will look like..I dress my daughter in shorts and she freezes, I put pants on her and she burns up...Great Senryu....GB Always, Tyesha
Rhinem Avatar
April 6, 2009 at 6:05 PM
....I see that You have not been posting much as of late? Hopefully this means that "Your Priceless Life" is being filled with other beautiful things!!!?:):)~And that, is all which I ever hope for for "Your Beautiful Soul!!!:):)~Until we meet again, soon I hope?~"My Love Always To 'You & Your Loves,' Eternally, John!!!"~"Sweet Dreams Precious Priceless Robin!!!":):) Bye ~
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April 6, 2009 at 5:55 PM
Smile~You must be a basketball fan?~But I do know one thing beyond any doubts, You are definately not a fool!!!:):)~"Hello Talented, Lovely and Beautiful Robin!!!:):)~Well, I have been away for a brief moment~Yet, I am sure that You know that I have missed "You!!!":):)~And, I am sincerely hoping that "You & Your Loves," are doing extremely wonderfully!!!?:):)....cont....
Chircop Avatar
April 4, 2009 at 10:21 PM
im as much as fool as you,i love sunshine,plenty of it-charma;-)
Skinner Avatar
April 4, 2009 at 8:34 PM
Smiling while reading,I liked this wish it would warm up also.Actually my B-day is april 1st.thanks for reminding me Spring is almost here........Jim
George   Avatar
April 1, 2009 at 10:04 PM
Very creative, Robin. Lainie
Esquire Avatar
April 1, 2009 at 9:14 PM
Dear Robin, I must be a fool too "looking for Sunshine" April Showers May Flowers and SUMMER LOVE YOU ALWAYS...HG
Lopez Avatar
April 1, 2009 at 5:31 PM
In different parts of the country I think march is still causing havac......love your haiku
Devonshire Avatar
April 1, 2009 at 5:26 PM
Creative and witty as always, Robin! A very nice senryu. I think we're all April fools if we truly believe winter is over. Great work! Love, Carolyn
Winter Avatar
April 1, 2009 at 1:28 PM
~lol~ Too perfect! Just how I feel, like most I guess by way of the comments here. Thanks for your kind wishes Robin. You are a sweetheart. Love & hugs, Shar xoxo
Moreno Avatar
April 1, 2009 at 11:38 AM
Funny one, I am an April fool also, nice job...Raul
Kelly Avatar
April 1, 2009 at 11:27 AM
The Court-Jester , perhaps QR !!! ... Shine onnnnnn ...
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April 1, 2009 at 10:04 AM
today is the day. and in st louis it's sunshine on both sides of the street. john h loving iii
P. Avatar
April 1, 2009 at 9:28 AM
really cute senryu, Robin! i am going through the same, everyone here predicted a rainy week, yet today the sun has fooled all, but for spring well... i am enjoying a crazy desert spring! :) ~ aRANY
Strand Avatar
April 1, 2009 at 8:46 AM
Your title reminds me of the kids question in the car when going on holiday Robin.Well posed senryu.Rgds Brian & thanks or your welcome comments today
Guzzi Avatar
April 1, 2009 at 8:32 AM
Me too I may give up the pen for the rake soon! Light & Love
Richards Avatar
April 1, 2009 at 8:04 AM
I'm a fool most of the year....but love your poem!! :) love, Carrie
Higgins Avatar
April 1, 2009 at 5:58 AM
I am an April fool with you my friend..I am looking for the sunshine also..raining like crazy in this state.
Ginn Avatar
April 1, 2009 at 5:48 AM
Look on Ms Gass I think you could catch a glimpse of it today! It's already gorgeous
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