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Is It Over Yet

Is it over yet? My soul needs freedom I can't handle this weight I carry around him My body is weak My mind won't settle I'm withering away; On my last petal The storms almost over But then I remember The love that we've known I can't help but to render Is it over yet? This aching heart Because of you,mind, We're just at the start

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/7/2011 8:45:00 PM
Simply worded with decent rhyming. Not a bad entry.
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Book: Shattered Sighs