Is It Me?

Is it me? What I do to Make you put your Hands on me? What I do to make Your hurt me the Way you do. Was it something I said, or something I did. Tell me, but You don’t have to Put your hands on Me. All I did was Loved you and be There for you. I Know I’m not perfect But I have feeling too. Don’t you understand that! So when I ask you is it me please Tell me!

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Robb A. Kopp

Date: 4/1/2010 12:49:00 PM

If this is inspired by events of your life don't internalise on it too much.Bullies think that they're better when they put others down. Either way Great write.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/1/2010 9:53:00 AM

I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Latorya. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol

Constance La France

Date: 4/1/2010 6:31:00 AM

Hi, nice poem, but, you entered this poem in my contest, In Search of the Human Mind, you did not read the instructions of the contest. You were to contact me first,it is right on the top of the contest, so I could assign a topic for you to write on. I am respectfully asking you to remove this poem from the contest, as it cannot be considered. If, you want to enter, please contact me, and I will assign you a topic... love Constance

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 4/1/2010 6:09:00 AM

sad write, hopefully not true.