Is-Ness of Being-Ness

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A steady toroidal force field manifests, to which we so yield, looking without interfering, wondrous at bliss currents spearing nodes within form, as of God’s will, making easy ascent uphill, enabled by love’s magnetism, felt distinctly in body prism, thus fixating our attention, in unending meditation. 30-July-2022

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/31/2022 7:51:00 PM

The title truly comes full circle with the penultimate and ultimate lines of your poem, Seeker. Here's to bliss! :) gw

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 7/31/2022 9:38:00 PM

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 7/30/2022 1:26:00 AM

How difficult is it to form a toroidal force? For God nothing is impossible.

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 7/30/2022 1:40:00 AM

The dance of polarities is toroidal. Right from an atom to the cosmos. Also, within our energy body. There’s nothing we have to do, it’s already there.