Irrational Reality

The shrill sounds in the night surely came from
My dream, or my sick psyche, I’m unsure.
Whichever, I awoke pantomiming
Sabbatical dreams after quarantine.

I desperately needed to escape
the unrelenting stress of concealing
The label I hide on the wine bottle.
I could leave the asylum anytime.

At breakfast they wore sorrowful faces when
They told me of the psycho cat’s demise.
I wept walking along listening to
Eerie boardwalk creaks near the white sand beach.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Connelly Avatar
October 15, 2022 at 2:22 PM
Does the Bell Jar ring for thee in this one Linda? Or is it just a poetic excercise? It's really good. Thanks...
Fowler Avatar
October 17, 2022 at 7:47 AM
Hi Jeff. Thanks for the read and feed. This was written for a Collaborate With Me Contest Sponsored by Kim Rodrigues. She supplied the lines in bold and built the scene around her lines. It was a fun exercise. I received and N/A in the contest. :)
Logan Avatar
September 24, 2020 at 8:05 AM
Great storytelling for the required theme lines, Linda. Soup mail for you.
Fowler Avatar
September 24, 2020 at 8:10 AM
Many thanks Jenna. I always welcome your comments and support. Linda
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