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Iron Love

Look into the camera I want this to last This moment This feeling This time Before the rapture of your dancing body exposes the way it was before us Listen closely: This is good so good and I can't let it go I want to save this time in a box this evanescent crumb of existence packed safely in a shoebox at the back of my closet I have one thing to say and a thousand ways to say it Your smile is the only one I can remember When sleep finally comes to this broken dystopia I can only dream of your identical agony.

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Date: 4/9/2022 6:03:00 AM
Marvelous debut poem, Vincent:-) Welcome to poetrysoup. I can't wait to read more of your work!
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Date: 4/8/2022 2:02:00 PM
Snap that picture! So often it is the only thing we have left as life goes on. I really enjoyed the read.
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Date: 4/4/2022 12:18:00 PM
Fine penning Vincent with good imagery and insightful thought.Welcome to PS, Trust you'll enjoy it here. God bless you, Gordon
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Date: 4/4/2022 8:40:00 AM
nice keep it up my friend
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Date: 4/4/2022 1:09:00 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." God bless you.
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