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Iron Angel

She stood by the icy waters She stood across the stream I called to the frozen maiden I thought that she might be a dream But she was an Iron Angel She was aloof and afar She was a broken butterfly She was a falling star written by Steven E. Mossburg (Steve) originally submitted January 30, 2008 for the contest "Why oh Why?" Sponsored by Constance~A Rambling Poet

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 10/19/2010 5:17:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest..Sara
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Date: 10/15/2010 2:11:00 PM
Very nice. I thought this was both a delicate and elegant piece. Congratulations on getting a win!
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Date: 10/9/2010 2:20:00 PM
very pretty, congrats on your win in the contest
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Date: 10/9/2010 7:08:00 AM
Many congratulations Steve on your win in Constance's contest 'Why oh Why' have a lovely weekend >> James
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Date: 10/8/2010 10:41:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Steven. Love,Carol
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Date: 10/8/2010 10:04:00 AM
Steven, congrats on your win with this beautiful write ;)
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Date: 10/8/2010 5:26:00 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest, Steven
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Date: 10/8/2010 4:03:00 AM
Congratulatons, Steve, on your placement in my contest, Why Oh Why ~~
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Date: 10/7/2010 11:53:00 PM
Congrats Steven on your win in Constance's contest with this extra special entry .. enjoy your sweet victory tonight with luv..
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Date: 10/7/2010 9:43:00 PM
gosh, this is so short and strange, and yet, I really like this a lot. VEry intersting little poem. A big congrats to you. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 10/7/2010 9:12:00 PM
Mysterious and interesting. many congratulations for this win.
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Date: 1/9/2009 4:11:00 PM
Interesting perseption. This poem can have mulitiple meanings depending on how the reader relates to it which I think is a benefit. The title caught my attention. Thank you for sharing your poem with us and for your kind words regarding mine. Keep on writing. Karen
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