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Irked By Her Moods

How the weather changes her flights like a moody woman’s temperament! A sunny beat trails along the lane where birdsongs drone of summer’s glow; my cotton dress bopping through morning air. Then in a haste, pour of rain gushes at 4 pm to douse my tresses, flat like a broom. Oh, her capricious whims spoil time's ritual until I crawl under a broken umbrella and torn kerchief, wiped out as a rinsed duckling. And she laughs the night away, huffing gusty winds across impetuous clouds leaving me with a rattle of sneezes. Though I am annoyed, irked by her ways: rainy, sunny, windy all in a day; my exasperation,sadly, has no force against this goddess' elemental power. Mary Oliver Rottman's Contest I'm So Annoyed 8/4/2015
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Kendrick Avatar
August 13, 2015 at 2:52 PM
Awesome work !! No wonder it is in the winners’ list. Congrats..Sara
Ebbs Avatar
August 11, 2015 at 11:09 PM
Nice write, congrats!
Sietesantos Avatar
August 11, 2015 at 10:58 AM
Mother Nature is indeed a force to reckon with! I love this excellent piece, dear Nette, that paints an awesome picture of her mood swings! And it is so annoying that we have no choice but to give in to her whims and fancies:-)! Congratulations on a top of the class win! Pandita
Ryerson Avatar
August 10, 2015 at 3:53 AM
Now THIS is a great idea for the contest my friend! Irked by Mother Nature huh? Love the phrase 'rattle of sneezes' especially. Over here she's not it a good mood either...Brutal heat averaging 100 degrees with a heat index through the roof...BIG congrats - Tim
A. Sharma Avatar
August 10, 2015 at 12:53 AM
Congrats on ur awesome winning poem nette! Great work!
Harding Avatar
August 9, 2015 at 1:55 AM
Fantastic imagery, Nette. Love this! Congrats on your win. xoxo
A  Avatar
August 8, 2015 at 9:55 PM
Nette, Congrats in Mary's contest. **SKAT**
Macfarlane Avatar
August 5, 2015 at 5:57 PM
I got drenched despite having an umbrella that another night....mother nature smiles at this wonderful tribute to her power. Excellent write Nette! Hugs
Andresen Avatar
August 5, 2015 at 3:58 AM
- A myth that Norwegians are "born with skis on their feet" ...... they should have been born with umbrella in hand - Good luck in the contest, Nette - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Muideen Avatar
August 4, 2015 at 3:35 PM
A beautiful and lovely write, good luck in the contest..........A.M.
Gonza Avatar
August 4, 2015 at 12:46 PM
Someone like her is hard to get-- flighty and exciting, but not today, after a rough traffic. I bow to master poet who can take a concept and whip it up!
Nunez Avatar
August 4, 2015 at 9:46 AM
:-))) I feel you Nette! The other day I forgot to bring an umbrella...you can imagine what happened. Much like what happened in your verse, I guess. Very descriptive...Yhank you for another plament in your contest btw. huggs!
Ongado Avatar
August 4, 2015 at 8:54 AM
I go nutty with this fickle" rain and shine" weather. This incredibly expressive poem certainly hits home--- the umbrella, kerchief, and bad hair make this verse zing!
Em Avatar
August 4, 2015 at 8:43 AM
Spectacular poetry!The imaginative rant of your words catches my attention as I feel myself trying to outrun mother nature as well! Glad to have placed in your contest. Thank you so!
Trifiatis Avatar
August 4, 2015 at 7:35 AM
The reader is certain that would never be irked by your poetry but uplifted, dear Nette. As far as the old lady is concerned we have to put up with her caprices for she is the only lady around! Wonderfully done. Good luck and a seven!
Onat Avatar
August 4, 2015 at 4:09 AM
She is one erratic, unpredictable lady! I like how your rhythm changed as the poem went along, from describing sun, rain, to wind. Excellent portrayal of climactic change! Thank you for liking my entry!
Allison Avatar
August 4, 2015 at 3:22 AM
I'm with you on this one Nette - wonderful personification - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan x
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