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Form Used - Form IV Sèadna.

 

Irish Road Trip - Form IV Seadna

Sailed across the sea to Dublin
then drove west to County Clare.
To the small village called Doolin,
'tis stout I'II be drinkin' there.

The craic as they say is mighty
In Gus Connors cosy pub,
at night there's always a cèilì
and stout served with homely grub.

Then the floor clears for set dancing
and they dance a set or two,
to the sound of the tin whistle
the bodhran and fiddle too.

Next morn saw the Cliffs of Moher
on the Wild Atlantic way
and the Aran Isles in Galway 
In the teeth of Galway bay.

Sometimes you won't be so lucky 
mists might roll in from the sea,
with howling winds like a banshee 
beware! paths might slippy be.

Calm days you might see seals basking
when the skies are blue and clear,
they're the selkie's, I'm not jokin'
I've seen some at Doolin Pier.

The limestone rocks of the Burren 
with a landscape like the moon,
It’s renowned for flora unique 
all the rocks are oblique hewn.

Last day I drove south to Blarney
to kiss the old Blarney stone.
And now I never stop talking
wife calls me the walking drone.

Drove to the M8 for Dublin
for a two and half hour ride
then stopped just outside the city
honour those that sadly died.

At Glasnevin there’s a graveyard
brave men and boys, Irelands pride
and in the towns and country 
fought fiercely and bravely died.

Bronze famine figures at dockland
with children, women, and men
and to see them you'd be saddened
thousands died in Ireland then.

Drove to the port for the ferry
t'was pouring the sky had paled
my days in Ireland were merry
and at six the ferry sailed.
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Goldsmith Avatar
April 6, 2026 at 1:21 PM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Irish Road Trip" write again. Love your pretty picture. Have a blessed day with your win...............
Cunningham Avatar
April 6, 2026 at 1:50 PM
Thank you Paula for your congrats and return visit. Tom
Layne Avatar
April 6, 2026 at 7:03 AM
I could feel the rhythm and the swing in this piece. What a trip! Congratulations, Tom
Cunningham Avatar
April 6, 2026 at 8:12 AM
Thank you very much Trina, have been there many times. Hope you had a lovely weekend. Tom
Messina Avatar
March 17, 2026 at 11:26 AM
Tom, this outstanding! Must have a "Stout" now lol. I've never been to Ireland, but it is on my bucket list. Hope all is well. Charlie
Cunningham Avatar
March 17, 2026 at 12:30 PM
Thank you Charlie, been to Ireland many times so had the knowledge, the form old Irish one was the hardest I've ever attempted, nearly gave up but plodded on. All well with me,hope you are too. Happy St Patrick's day. Tom
G  Avatar
March 17, 2026 at 9:27 AM
That's an expansive poem Tom - covering a lot of history. Place wise there's a few still on my list - just Dublin (twice), Belfast and Cork so far - I just wish they'd make the drinks cheaper there! It was €9.90 so it was, where it'd be less than €5, possibly even only €2 in Spain
Cunningham Avatar
March 17, 2026 at 11:10 AM
Thank-you LG, I agree, prices over there have skyrocketed over the last few years.You wouldn't want to get into big rounds, you'd be bankrupt lol Tom
bard Avatar
March 16, 2026 at 10:55 PM
Cunningham Avatar
March 17, 2026 at 12:43 AM
Thank you very much Douglas ,I'm happy you enjoyed it. It was an old Irish form I used, it was quite challenging to compose. I've tried many forms but rhyme is my go to form. Tom
bard Avatar
March 16, 2026 at 11:01 PM
Good day Tom Felt like i had visited Ireland Most enjoyable I like rhyme as well. Most enjoyable Best Wishes Douglas
Kendrick Avatar
March 16, 2026 at 5:44 AM
I enjoyed reading this one. It has good rhythm, rhyme and flow. I felt like I learned a little about Ireland. Thank you for sharing this one with us. Sara K
Cunningham Avatar
March 16, 2026 at 7:35 AM
Thank you very much Sara, it's a beautiful country I've been many times. Tom
Buhagiar Avatar
March 16, 2026 at 12:07 AM
I have been to Ireland once and drove around in a rented car. Loved it especially since the weather was without rain. We drank beer and had soup and bread. Your descriptions reminded me of those days.
Cunningham Avatar
March 16, 2026 at 12:30 AM
Thank you Victor, you were lucky with the weather as its known for its 'mists', been many times as my parents were from there and I've got relatives in Dublin and Clare. Tom
Godwin Avatar
March 15, 2026 at 10:20 PM
Tom, this is wonderful, not only because of the very 'real' feeling you gave the tour but because it seems personal (readers never know), firsthand delivery by you who actually did / see all those things. Either way, you took me to Ireland. I've always wanted to go but doubted I ever would, then you took me and I can add that to what I've seen in documentaries/movies, etc. I believe you've got a winner though I don't remember all the 'senses' he asked be included.
Cunningham Avatar
March 15, 2026 at 10:32 PM
Thank you very much CayCay, my parents were from County Clare in the west of Ireland but I was born in the UK and have been to those places mentioned bar Glasnevin Cemetery. That was the easy part but the old Irish form was hard to do, strict syllables, alliteration etc, I nearly gave up but kept going back to it. Tom
Brown  Avatar
March 14, 2026 at 7:46 AM
Love this poem as absolutely love Ireland. Beautiful scenery and beautiful people. Love the Dubliner songs too. Well done! Love it :-)
Cunningham Avatar
March 14, 2026 at 10:00 AM
Thank very much Lisa, I totally agree, the west is so beautiful, still the old Ireland I knew as a boy. Enjoy your weekend. Tom
George Avatar
March 14, 2026 at 7:15 AM
Wonderful description of a trip you had . After reading your poem I feel as if l have visited these places. You have also paid a glowing tribute to Ireland's war heroes. Well done.
Cunningham Avatar
March 14, 2026 at 7:25 AM
Thank you Valsa, found this form one of the hardest I've ever attempted, it's an old Irish form, the only thing going for me was the knowledge as I've been to Ireland many times. Tom
Maverick Avatar
March 13, 2026 at 2:06 AM
Well conveyed Tom...I got to go on a Journey.' And it cost me not a jot.' I See that there was something ' though That you have missed..The dewwy fogs Of Eire'e some call the Irish mists.? I blame on the kissing of the stone in Blarney town, and msybe a dram too Many of ' black bush a trikling down' in Such a misty mither..I'd not be at all Surprised..Or maybe the department For tourisam.? Invested in getting you On their side.? Lol))) all the best.'
Cunningham Avatar
March 13, 2026 at 6:48 AM
Thank you Joe, glad you enjoyed it, if you've never been you should go, stunning scenery and friendly people. Tom PS,thanks for the tip,I've added another stanza.
Wolf Avatar
March 11, 2026 at 9:32 PM
Tom, you are as fine a tour guide as I could ever hope to hire. Thoroughly enjoyed your 'travelog.' Thanks, Gershon
Cunningham Avatar
March 12, 2026 at 6:45 AM
Thank you Gershon, the west of Ireland is a beautiful place. Been to all them places over time. Tom
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March 11, 2026 at 4:06 PM
Enjoyed the read Tom, ‘Twas a wonderful Irish road trip… Beryl
Cunningham Avatar
March 12, 2026 at 6:44 AM
Thank you Beryl,im happy you enjoyed it. Tom
Roper Avatar
March 11, 2026 at 3:34 PM
love the timeline of the day, especially the second to the last stanza. I'm not sure what Trump has done was right , but I feel it was very wrong.
Cunningham Avatar
March 12, 2026 at 6:43 AM
Thank you Eve , wars usually create more problems than they solve, time will tell. Worrying times for sure. Tom
Goldsmith Avatar
March 11, 2026 at 11:47 AM
I need a vacation and your "Irish Road Trip" took me there. Great Picture.... What a wonderful write/story you have here. Loved It... Happy St. Patrick's Day. Have a lovely day writing away............
Cunningham Avatar
March 11, 2026 at 1:30 PM
Thanks Paula, no worries, gremlins in the soupbowl lol. Have been to those places many times over the years. Hope your week is going well. Tom
Goldsmith Avatar
March 11, 2026 at 11:54 AM
The edit is Not working. I forgot to wish you "Good Luck." I did, "Living In My Irish World." I know, you have a winner here. Now the submit is Not working. You may get more than one copy. Sorry....
Sands Avatar
March 10, 2026 at 2:14 PM
Wow I really enjoyed this. That is great you could have that beautiful trip! :)
Cunningham Avatar
March 10, 2026 at 2:19 PM
Thanks Heidi my parents were from County Clare and have been to those places many times, the old Gaelic form to write it was challenging though. Tom
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March 10, 2026 at 1:40 PM
I’ve been to them all Tom, and never had a bad time, the west of Ireland is very beautiful, and the Guinness somehow tastes better (softer) out there, a few (bones of contention) going on in Glasnevin cemetery, but such is history! you’ve written a wonderful piece here, tourism Ireland will love it too! Cheers David
Cunningham Avatar
March 16, 2026 at 11:25 AM
Me too, only know a few sayings myself. There's not many use gaelic now which is sad really, they should have ditched English after the WOI.
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March 10, 2026 at 2:32 PM
I only know a Cupla Focail myself, so will probably give this one a miss, besides I always prefer to read what others think of the country as a whole!
Cunningham Avatar
March 10, 2026 at 1:56 PM
Thank-you very much David, the only one that I haven't been to is Glasnevin, but its on my bucket list.the form was a challenge, I read somewhere it works better with the Gaelic language rather than English,I nearly gave up but I had the knowledge so it was a big help and gave it a go. Tom
Alhemaidy Avatar
March 10, 2026 at 1:18 PM
Well enjoyed read of your very nice poem! Have a nice day ~ AA
Cunningham Avatar
March 10, 2026 at 1:50 PM
Thank you Abdullah im happy you enjoyed it. Tom
Dietrich Avatar
March 10, 2026 at 9:33 AM
Really cute. I especially liked how you did the Blarney Stone stanza
Cunningham Avatar
March 10, 2026 at 10:08 AM
Thanks Andrea happy you enjoyed it..kissed the stone many years ago I never shut up lol. Tom
Lane Avatar
March 10, 2026 at 8:47 AM
Tom, you just took me on a trip to one of the two countries on my bucket list. The settings, the cities... you made it all come alive. Iffin' you're up for another trip I'll be meetin' ya at Gus Conner's Pub on St. Patrick's Day... some year!
Cunningham Avatar
March 10, 2026 at 9:02 AM
Thank you Lin, I'd be up for that. The only place I haven't been is Glasnevin Cemetery, its on my bucket list though. Tom
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