Iridescent Bubble (Rhymethor)
O, this sweet candy day-
A pink duck gently sway
As this new morn is born
To unstring me from thorn
With tenderness and care
That I can not compare
One of her many charms
Swiftly melts in my arms
To unstring me from thorn
As this new morn is born
A pink duck gently sway
O, this sweet candy day-
Tinged with such beauty and glow, for my weary mind
Note:
Rhymethor is a poetic form with a title of 6 syllables,
3 rhyming stanzas of 6 syllables, (rhyme scheme:
aabb, ccdd, bbaa) and an inverted 3rd stanza of the
1st stanza, with a concluding line of 12 syllables,
representing the total number of lines.
Copyright © Ernesto P. Santiago | Year Posted 2008
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