Iridescent Raindrop

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                                        Iridescent rain
                                  Only drop created by
                                  Sunbeam on new rain

                                        Iridescent tear
                              One tear created by words
                                   Hateful hurting words

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 11/13/2010 4:06:00 AM
I am falling in love with your talent. I click, and Boom, another masterpiece! WOW
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Date: 11/6/2010 7:37:00 PM
I enjoyed reading this poem. It is very appropriate. Thanks.
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Date: 10/29/2010 1:28:00 AM
oh thank you for sharing this with us sara duncan
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Date: 10/24/2010 8:41:00 AM
great imagery and so well penned, Sara! Thank you for commenting "Early Snow". Last year we had a long winter and it seems that we will have another one this year. It is nice to walk in the snow if there is a blue sky!!! Have a nce week!...Gert
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Date: 10/21/2010 8:59:00 AM
Yes that rain seems to be falling today too and your lines are vivid and beautiful Sara.. your blog was most encouraging today .. keep the faith strong and positive forward..luv.. all will be well in God's time my friend..
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Date: 10/21/2010 7:21:00 AM
Those are the words we remember forever.. Beautiful write Sara, says such a lot ~ thank you for your comments always Wilma
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Date: 10/21/2010 4:32:00 AM
fine expressions of words
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Date: 10/20/2010 4:55:00 PM
Sad to think what a few words can do to a kind heart. Great balance here Sara...great poem ! much love, james
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Date: 10/20/2010 4:32:00 PM
Beautiful images and write my dear poet friend..love Michael
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Date: 10/20/2010 2:03:00 PM
good comparison... we have church tonight!
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Date: 10/20/2010 12:05:00 PM
Enjoyed the fine write with good images, sara
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Date: 10/20/2010 8:27:00 AM
enjoyed this write Sara....TAH
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