Iran
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Iran
In the gardens of Hafiz
where verse eternally embraces the romantics heart
thus poetry succumbs to our desires
behind the tallest forbidden walls
a canopy of flowers each spring bloom
metaphor dancing near the city gates
under the evening stars
so pleasing was this experience
Iran
fearful of such happiness
where vineyards grow
Iran
In the gardens of Hafiz
where verse eternally embraces the romantics heart
thus poetry entices our desires
behind the tallest of forbidden walls
a canopy laden of flowers each spring bloom
metaphor dancing near the city gates
under the evening stars
so pleasing was this experience
Iran
fearful of such happiness
where vineyards grow
Copyright © Arthur Vaso | Year Posted 2018
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