Inviting

In his arms it feels so warm and cozy.
Not a worry in the world have we.
Very happy and content, feeling life is rosy,
I cannot think of another place I'd rather be.
Time with him is my stress release.
I wish I could stay with him this way evermore.
Never could I find on earth a greater peace,
Gifted with the inviting smile of the one I adore.

March 2, 2023
Sponsor: Constance La France
For writing challenge - I Words - Poetry contest
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La France Avatar
April 3, 2023 at 4:36 PM
Andrea, wonderful writing and thank you for sharing your poem in my Writing Challenge congratulations !
Horsman Avatar
March 5, 2023 at 8:44 PM
This is so lovely Andrea, special feeling i had, reading this. Harry
DiMino Avatar
March 5, 2023 at 2:46 PM
For sure; everything else dissolves away to insignificance when in the arms of love. Beautiful write, my friend. I agree with Kim. Blessings.
Rodrigues Avatar
March 5, 2023 at 9:57 AM
You, dear Andrea, are a romantic :)
Sands Avatar
March 5, 2023 at 6:46 AM
A special moment in time Andrea. Great one :)
Poet Avatar
March 5, 2023 at 6:21 AM
Andrea, This acrostic is as perfect as it gets. Enchanting and delicate in nature. Good luck with the contest
Gregory Avatar
March 4, 2023 at 7:19 PM
This sentiment is heartfelt and so timeless, you have ample amount of gratitude which highten the depth of your piece. Andrea I mentioned it before, you make life observation and deftly share them which arouses nostalgia in me.
Edmonds  Avatar
March 3, 2023 at 6:01 PM
A lovely, romantic Acrostic poem Andrea… Congratulations on your success in Constance’s Contest… Belle
Kavanagh  Avatar
March 3, 2023 at 2:02 PM
An very inviting acrostic Andrea, no big overinflated words are needed to express a life long love, you do it here with a cosy simple warmth, cheers David
Hawley Avatar
March 3, 2023 at 2:39 AM
Nice contest entry. Good job.
Buhagiar Avatar
March 3, 2023 at 1:00 AM
A lovely and romantic acoustic.
Kerr Avatar
March 2, 2023 at 11:56 PM
Andrea, This is an immaculate acrostic. Romantic and sensitive. Best of luck in contest Howard
Turner Avatar
March 2, 2023 at 4:28 PM
I'll bet he'd say the same about you:) This is very well written, Andrea. Good luck!
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