Invitation To the Rain

revive us with your mist, refresh the earth calming rain, go not astray settle our dust and care rain, rain, come softly symphony of our delight summons is awash pitti–pat, pitti-pat, pat feel the rhythm in the rain shower of coolness calls our souls to reflection why the umbrella combining kimo, tanka, and senryu in an invitation to the rain
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Bedave Avatar
March 16, 2014 at 9:34 PM
rain to the T wonderful poem
A  Avatar
July 1, 2013 at 10:14 PM
A GOOD WINNING VERSE ................ GOODNIGHT *SKAT
Dietrich Avatar
June 28, 2013 at 7:50 PM
how cool and that ending line why the umbrella. That is a great touch. Congrats on the win.
Arowolo Avatar
June 28, 2013 at 4:31 PM
Wonderful piece,Nice combination...Nice flow..Congrats on your superb write and win...
Gildersleeve Avatar
June 28, 2013 at 1:52 PM
Congratulations Reason on your fantastic win. A fine poem with the three different forms. Right now I'm singing "Rain, Rain Go Away, Don't Come Back For A Week Or Two." It's been raining everyday for a week and will continue into next wheel too. We've been washed clean. Warm Smiles, Connie
Sirak Avatar
June 28, 2013 at 8:43 AM
I love the rain. It is great how you found the music in the falling rain. Congrats on your win
Undertaker Avatar
June 28, 2013 at 6:13 AM
great write. congrats or the win
Guzzi Avatar
June 27, 2013 at 7:06 PM
Nice sound effect! Congrad's Light & Love
Gorelick Avatar
June 27, 2013 at 6:45 PM
Lovely...all three are winners. congrats. BG
Johnson Avatar
June 27, 2013 at 12:46 PM
Very nicely done. congratulations. Love, Joyce
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