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Invisibly Divisible

Invisibly Divisible Like a vanishing vapor in the misty morn Sheltered secretive solitudes that I have born Within Isolated illusions from the worldly view Reflected waves of light in the spectrum spew You can not hear my wandering withering words For all you hear are the battling bathing birds You can not see my sequestered sloping steps For all you see are the evaporating end effects A broken brumous bipolar in the lost and found My cloak of invisibility keeps me blindly bound For I am a divisible divided distracted deflection An apparition appearing for your abandoned affection. 02.16.2017 Invisible...Contest Sponsored by...Lewis Raynes

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Date: 3/10/2017 2:14:00 AM
This is beautiful penned on a topic that is most misunderstood. Your words feel stark and desolate conveying the immense isolation to the reader with truth. Excellent writing:-) many blessings to you :-) lynn
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Date: 2/23/2017 10:31:00 PM
Great write, WW...you described mental illness powerfully with excellent use of poetic devices...big congrats and hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 2/22/2017 2:58:00 PM
So much to read into this WW. So well done. Congratulations.
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Date: 2/22/2017 8:54:00 PM
Thank you Jean...always a rewarding pleasure to see your smiling face my friend...god bless...^WW^
Date: 2/21/2017 7:22:00 PM
Well done WW. Congratulations.
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Date: 2/22/2017 8:49:00 PM
Thank you Janis...always a pleasure to have you visit my friend...god bless...^WW^
Date: 2/21/2017 6:51:00 PM
Great work WW I would have placed this one at or near the top excellent rhyme and amazing alliteration a7
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Date: 2/22/2017 8:47:00 PM
Thank you John...a least, somewhere between 1'st and 2'nd lol...god bless...^WW^
Date: 2/21/2017 6:28:00 PM
Congrats on your placement. I like the alliterations.
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Date: 2/22/2017 8:46:00 PM
Thank you Agnes...very charming to have you visit my friend...god bless...^WW^
Date: 2/16/2017 2:00:00 PM
what a stark, intriguing piece about split personality... truly a gem highlighted by alliteration, WW... hugggs
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Date: 2/22/2017 8:44:00 PM
Thank you nette...always nice to read your lovely comments...god bless and many HUGGGGGSSSSS lol...^WW^
Date: 2/16/2017 12:54:00 PM
Really nice WW, a bit sad and a lot lonely but still wonderfully written. Good luck in the contest
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Date: 2/22/2017 8:42:00 PM
Thank you Chris...god bless my friend...^WW^

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