Invisibly Divisible

Invisibly Divisible

Like a vanishing vapor in the misty morn
Sheltered secretive solitudes that I have born
Within Isolated illusions from the worldly view
Reflected waves of light in the spectrum spew

You can not hear my wandering withering words
For all you hear are the battling bathing birds
You can not see my sequestered sloping steps
For all you see are the evaporating end effects

A broken brumous bipolar in the lost and found
My cloak of invisibility keeps me blindly bound
For I am a divisible divided distracted deflection
An apparition appearing for your abandoned affection.



02.16.2017
Invisible...Contest
Sponsored by...Lewis Raynes

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 3/10/2017 2:14:00 AM
This is beautiful penned on a topic that is most misunderstood. Your words feel stark and desolate conveying the immense isolation to the reader with truth. Excellent writing:-) many blessings to you :-) lynn
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Date: 2/23/2017 10:31:00 PM
Great write, WW...you described mental illness powerfully with excellent use of poetic devices...big congrats and hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 2/22/2017 2:58:00 PM
So much to read into this WW. So well done. Congratulations.
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Date: 2/22/2017 8:54:00 PM
Thank you Jean...always a rewarding pleasure to see your smiling face my friend...god bless...^WW^
Date: 2/21/2017 7:22:00 PM
Well done WW. Congratulations.
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Date: 2/22/2017 8:49:00 PM
Thank you Janis...always a pleasure to have you visit my friend...god bless...^WW^
Date: 2/21/2017 6:51:00 PM
Great work WW I would have placed this one at or near the top excellent rhyme and amazing alliteration a7
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Date: 2/22/2017 8:47:00 PM
Thank you John...a least, somewhere between 1'st and 2'nd lol...god bless...^WW^
Date: 2/21/2017 6:28:00 PM
Congrats on your placement. I like the alliterations.
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Date: 2/22/2017 8:46:00 PM
Thank you Agnes...very charming to have you visit my friend...god bless...^WW^
Date: 2/16/2017 2:00:00 PM
what a stark, intriguing piece about split personality... truly a gem highlighted by alliteration, WW... hugggs
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Date: 2/22/2017 8:44:00 PM
Thank you nette...always nice to read your lovely comments...god bless and many HUGGGGGSSSSS lol...^WW^
Date: 2/16/2017 12:54:00 PM
Really nice WW, a bit sad and a lot lonely but still wonderfully written. Good luck in the contest
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Date: 2/22/2017 8:42:00 PM
Thank you Chris...god bless my friend...^WW^
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