Invisible Co-Write With Paul Callus

clad in rags, he wanders on Wall Street
   he is invisible to hustling stock brokers
       he is a man with no money, no property
          a hapless struggler of excessive loan burdens

bitter winter winds whip across Broadway
   he is invisible to affluent theatre-goers wearing warm winter coats
      he is a man who watches them scurry past the cardboard box that is his bed
        like a rain-dog, huddling in the shadows of alleys and doorways

he hears deafening explosions of New Year fireworks
    he is invisible to the revelers
       he is a man who cowers, recalling gunfire of a war he fought
          echoing through his mind in restless nights
             the incessant thumping of traumatic stress

he is invisible...a victim of post-Vietnam, Afghanistan and Iraq
    who once bore a uniform and served his country with pride 
       he is invisible suffering alone, paying the price 
         through severe disabilities and permanent scars
 
with sadness, he watches voters going to the polls
    he is invisible, a veteran with no voice in elections
        he is a man who cannot vote without an “address”
           a placard on a pavement might catch the eye
   
unemployed, homeless, unseen
      but most of all forgotten
        he is a man who seems invisible
          but he is still a man



*As we prepare to celebrate Veterans Day, I would like to thank Paul Callus
for co-writing with me.  Our veterans deserve more than we can ever give them.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 11/10/2014 11:15:00 AM
Yes, he is still one of the strongest men. Excellent talents both. Beautiful poem of golden words. Loved always,bl
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Date: 11/7/2014 12:29:00 PM
Hi Carolyn....I was touched reading this poem just now, even though I knew what it was all about and had a hand in writing it. Posted here it seems to grow in stature and significance. Thank you for giving me the opportunity to co-write with you once again and for being a source of inspiration. Love & Hugs ...... paul
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 11/7/2014 2:51:00 PM
Thank you, Paul. It is always a pleasure to write with you. Hugs, Carolyn
Date: 11/6/2014 7:59:00 PM
Carolyn, what an excellent write. So poignant and tugged at my heart strings. Though my dear husband is not invisible to us his family, being a Vietnam vet he suffers still from all he went through including the enigma of being unappreciated and looked down upon for his involvement in a very unpopular war. One can look around and see others worse off though, like your Invisible man. So sad but a reality.
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 11/7/2014 2:55:00 PM
Dear Charlene, It's wonderful to connect with you on Poetry Soup, but I'm sad to hear your husband is still affected by the atmosphere that awaited returning Vietnam veterans. Give him a hug for me.
Date: 11/6/2014 5:40:00 PM
This is heart wrenching..No one should be homeless,let along people who fought.to defend their country..And yes every honeless is a man..cause in the end its our society who makes us who we are.My heart goes to any himeless and any hero unrexognized.Excellent oiece Paul and Carolyn
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Paul Callus
Date: 11/14/2014 5:01:00 PM
Thank you for stopping by Charm. Have a lovely weekend. // paul
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 11/7/2014 2:59:00 PM
Yes, dear friend, it is heartbreaking to see homeless Veterans wandering through U.S. cities. I see too many of them. Thanks for reading,
Date: 11/6/2014 5:40:00 PM
This a absoluetly tremendous co write that speaks volumes...Thank you for bring this the attention it needs...Tim
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Date: 11/6/2014 4:58:00 PM
This heart-breaking poem is speaks such sad truths.....it is so wrong, immoral and beyond disgraceful that such a thing could happen to the heroes that have fought for our land of freedom! Well said to both of you!
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 11/6/2014 5:00:00 PM
Carrie, I saw a homeless man with two artificial legs. Pretty sure he was a Vietnam veteran. It breaks my heart to think of how we fail to reward their bravery and sacrifice. Thanks, Hon
Date: 11/6/2014 4:48:00 PM
Brilliantly written Paul and Carolyn - I agree 100% with you statement at the end and no one who fought for their country should end up in this condition. Hugs jan xxx
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Paul Callus
Date: 11/14/2014 5:03:00 PM
Many thanks my lovely ladies...I'm blushing!:)
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Jan Allison
Date: 11/6/2014 5:06:00 PM
Our Island is very small with 85,000 but I know of no one here sleeping rough. I think it is so so sad that these brave men and women make such sacrifices and are then abandoned by the country they fought for. I agree Paul is very special and it was such an honour to meet him and his family:-) Hugs jan xx
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 11/6/2014 5:01:00 PM
Jan, this does happen in the states. I hope it isn't happening on the Island of Man as well. So glad to learn you had a good time on your visit with Paul. He's so special!
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