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Invisible

Like speck of dust from celestial ceilings, I cling To evaporated water molecules rising, singing into the sky, vacuous regions Netherworlds have seen me clawing my way OUT But still I remain invisible to your naked eye Naked and seen through like space that was meant to be filled but Remains, EMPTY. I do not mean to scream, but I can not be heard either, sometimes The feelings don't get to me and I wonder to myself if I am here at all? The time knowing that if I paint pictures no one will gogh for it It isn't visible, it isn't something they can strike DOWN As long as they remain adjunct to it, in their dimension AND they forgive me for hiding alongside it. Invisible

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 9/11/2012 8:30:00 PM
Being a speck of dust I can identify with. It's a neat way to observe while being unobseved. Like being part of thiings and invisible all the same. Set me thinking of the possibilities!
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Date: 8/10/2011 5:14:00 PM
Great Poetry, I love the theme and the way you toss the words around throughout... A true Poet my friend... Michael
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Date: 8/8/2011 2:30:00 PM
Tim, I feel this emptiness sometimes, wondering if anyone even cares to look my way or listen to what I have to say. It does make one feel "invisible" and want to scream. Excellent write, my friend. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/8/2011 3:44:00 AM
power-packed with your superb use of words and how they fulfill their brooding place in this poem.,... lovely! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 8/7/2011 6:50:00 PM
I think I hide alongside it as well. Very well written, love the poem!!
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