Invisible

I am the wind
Weightless, always in motion
Free flowing,
Reaching out gently
To everything
In touch
And yet, I
Am lonely
Becoming still
And solitary as
People walk through
Me, the wind
As I blow harder,
Wishing to be heard
And yet, no one
Hears the outcry
Within my soul
And as they wonder
Where I am
They look but,
I am no longer here
But,
Did they every really
Care anyway
Of my being?

I ponder these things
While people
Continue
To walk through me
Hearing, but not listening
To my free flowing
Words of gentle
Caresse to the soul
Of any who stop and
Listen
To my own heartbeat
Of undying existence
As I determinedly
Flow on, looking
For my own
Ocean of happiness...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 3/4/2010 10:23:00 PM
Very nice, perspicacious. Makes me feel alone and transparent.
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Date: 3/4/2010 7:09:00 AM
I’m am so pleased that you shared your thoughts with us today.
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Date: 3/2/2010 4:34:00 PM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Jerrell. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/2/2010 2:41:00 PM
wow this is really great jerrell no joke i loved it, this is a great way to start out on soup! this poem was beautiful a little sad, had great imagery and as far as im concerned it is a giant metaphor expressing lonliness it is great i cant wait for more! JO
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Date: 3/2/2010 2:33:00 PM
Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family of poets...please continue to share your creative writes with us all...as this delight tonight...enjoyed ..luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup..
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