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I am the wind Weightless, always in motion Free flowing, Reaching out gently To everything In touch And yet, I Am lonely Becoming still And solitary as People walk through Me, the wind As I blow harder, Wishing to be heard And yet, no one Hears the outcry Within my soul And as they wonder Where I am They look but, I am no longer here But, Did they every really Care anyway Of my being? I ponder these things While people Continue To walk through me Hearing, but not listening To my free flowing Words of gentle Caresse to the soul Of any who stop and Listen To my own heartbeat Of undying existence As I determinedly Flow on, looking For my own Ocean of happiness...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/4/2010 10:23:00 PM
Very nice, perspicacious. Makes me feel alone and transparent.
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Date: 3/4/2010 7:09:00 AM
I’m am so pleased that you shared your thoughts with us today.
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Date: 3/2/2010 4:34:00 PM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Jerrell. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/2/2010 2:41:00 PM
wow this is really great jerrell no joke i loved it, this is a great way to start out on soup! this poem was beautiful a little sad, had great imagery and as far as im concerned it is a giant metaphor expressing lonliness it is great i cant wait for more! JO
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Date: 3/2/2010 2:33:00 PM
Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family of poets...please continue to share your creative writes with us all...as this delight tonight...enjoyed ..luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup..
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