Roy Pett Poet Haiku

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now we’ve come of age

                 seventeen years in the dark 

                                         make noise, let's party

6/10/2018

Magicicada Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Maureen McGreavy.

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Susan Gentry June 20, 2018 at 11:16 PM Congratulations on your win! Roy Pett June 21, 2018 at 4:38 AM Thank you so much for your congratulations Susan much appreciated. :))

Reason A. Poteet June 16, 2018 at 11:32 AM Every 18 year old’s delight, Roy. Great play on the seventeen years underground. Truly, truly- salutations on a super haiku and your placement. Roy Pett June 16, 2018 at 11:51 AM Thank you so much for your very kind comment and best wishes Reason much appreciated. :))

John Lawless June 15, 2018 at 6:05 PM a teenagers breakout session....Nicely done Roy Roy Pett June 16, 2018 at 9:54 AM Thank you so much for your very kind comment John much appreciated. :))

Anne-Lise Andresen June 15, 2018 at 12:53 PM - Congratulations, Roy :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Roy Pett June 15, 2018 at 2:10 PM Thank you so much for your congratulations Anne-Lise much appreciated. :))

Eve Roper June 15, 2018 at 12:11 PM Nicely done haiku,Roy, love the imagery! Congratulations on your win ..... Hugs Eve ~' * Roy Pett June 15, 2018 at 2:06 PM Thank you so much for your very kind comment and congratulations Eve, your support and encouragement is really appreciated. :))

Dale Gregory Cozart June 15, 2018 at 11:21 AM Very clever. Congrats. Roy Pett June 15, 2018 at 2:03 PM Thank you so much for your very kind comment and congratulations Dale much appreciated. :))

Tom Cunningham June 15, 2018 at 9:46 AM Congratulations Roy. Tom. Roy Pett June 15, 2018 at 10:17 AM Thank you so much Tom for your congratulations and your very kind soup mail much appreciated my friend. :))

Constance La France June 15, 2018 at 8:54 AM Roy, congratulations on your win in the contest with this fun Haiku. Hope all is well with you. Constance Roy Pett June 15, 2018 at 10:15 AM Thank you so much for your congratulations Constance, so pleased you liked my haiku, I am keeping well enjoying my favourite season summer, wishing you well and thanks for your support and encouragement much appreciated. :))

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart June 15, 2018 at 8:54 AM This is so much fun Roy! I love it :) Party on Garth. Congratulations on your win in my contest and thank you for your support! xomo Roy Pett June 15, 2018 at 10:09 AM Thank you so much for your congratulations Maureen, over the moon with my placement also I gained a lot of knowledge about Cicada fascinating, thank you for your support and encouragement my friend. :))

Vijay Pandit June 11, 2018 at 6:09 AM I like the way you approached this theme..well crafted..best for a win, Roy. Roy Pett June 11, 2018 at 3:12 PM Thank you so much for your very kind comment and best wishes Vijay much appreciated my friend. :))

Anne-Lise Andresen June 11, 2018 at 3:47 AM - Is not old enough, must be 18 years (Norwegian alcohol law :))) - Well done, Roy :) - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Roy Pett June 11, 2018 at 7:52 AM Thank you so much Anne-Lise, I think the Cicada had other thoughts on their mind lol, thanks again for your support and best wishes. :))

Tom Cunningham June 10, 2018 at 5:43 PM Great hakiu Roy, after 17 years in the dark I think I'd want to party lol. Good luck. Tom. Roy Pett June 10, 2018 at 5:48 PM Thanks Tom for your very kind comment and best wishes my friend. :))