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Cherished ... Is the word I use to describe The works of poetry that I add to my preferred list That list is quite limited ... I suppose you could say I'm picky But those poems are the whole package NOT with respect to having all the elements That I look for in good poetry But rather how those pieces represent the ones who wrote them If looking for perfection, the list might not exist But I save the poems that speak to me of the author How that particular poet sees this process How they view life and love and the Universe in general How they wield the various tools of language To sculpt what THEY feel is poetry But most of all ... My preferred list is rife with enjoyment The works that just plain MOVE me in some way Light or dark, up or down, left or right, bad or good, happy or sad If my heart thrums faster or my spirit is affected more intensely If I'm left with the motivation and yearning for more Then it gets added to the list ... Poetry is a piece of the person who wrote it And a gift to those who it reaches The pleasure I find in unwrapping that gift Is the worth I attach to it So if it makes that special list It's a gift I wish to open again-and-again With the joy of a giggling child On Christmas morning. ~ 1st Place ~ in the "Fave" Poetry Contest, Line Gauthier, Judge & Sponsor.

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Date: 12/18/2019 5:17:00 PM
Such a marvelous piece here, Greg:-) I couldn't agree with you more, especially on the last 2 stanzas. Incidentally, thanks again for faving my poem, "A Glimpse Of A Promising Day" Congrats on your top win!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/19/2019 1:00:00 AM
Thank you so kindly, Sir Edward - your work is some of the best here at PS, and I hope to have more time soon to read and comment - I have missed doing so, especially the inspiration and ideas I get from doing so ... I just have not been able to this fall. I pray you are well, My Poet Brother! :o)
Date: 12/17/2019 9:20:00 AM
Poetry that resonates somehow to the reader is a present that can be opened many times by adding to a favorite list. Many of yours appear in mine, beginning with "Tell the Night to Hold Me." It's also a gift to the poet in the 'sincere' commendations it receives. I haven't been commenting on many poems lately, since there's been an inundation of Christmas related writes.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/19/2019 12:53:00 AM
Oh my goodness, Lin - that was one I wrote very early-on, yet is still my most-viewed by FAR, (I think over 6,600 last I checked), and is on the top 100 all-time - thank you for fave-ing! Funny, it is certainly a fave of mine, too, but not my number one by any means ... sometimes what we look for as people is not always in sync with what we consider our "best", and strike other people differently.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/19/2019 12:53:00 AM
(2) I think my personal fave is a short piece I wrote called "Soft, the Bells", though it never saw the success of "Tell the Night". Blessings and thanks for this wonderful comment, Dear Poet! :o) <3
Date: 12/16/2019 6:56:00 PM
You have expressed so beautifully what so many of us feel here Greg. Congratulations on your deserving first placement. Mele Kalikimaka! xxoo
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/19/2019 12:58:00 AM
That's very sweet of you to say, Connie, and I thank you so much - blessings! :o) <3
Date: 12/16/2019 8:25:00 AM
Congrats Greg--I 100% agree with the 4th stanza, and the ending is pretty cool, sweet nostalgia!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/19/2019 12:57:00 AM
Thank you so much, LJ, that is very kind of you - blessings, friend! :o)
Date: 12/16/2019 12:41:00 AM
Congrats on your winning poem :)~ Greg
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/19/2019 12:56:00 AM
Many kind thanks to you, Gregory! :o)
Date: 12/15/2019 11:26:00 PM
Congratulations, Greg on your 1st place win. Great revelations on poetry.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/19/2019 12:56:00 AM
Thank you so kindly, Subimal, it is so greatly appreciated, my friend! :o)
Date: 12/15/2019 10:05:00 PM
Wow! Congrats. Thanks for sharing this... especially these lines, so delightful to me: "Poetry is a piece of the person who wrote it And a gift to those who it reaches The pleasure I find in unwrapping that gift Is the worth I attach to it." God bless you, great Bard!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/19/2019 12:56:00 AM
Amen, Beata, you are so right! Thank you for the kind comments, My Friend - blessings! :o) <3
Date: 12/15/2019 9:07:00 PM
Let me say, this is MOST excellent indeed. Congrats on your well deserved top placement, Greg. I echo your sentiments.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/19/2019 12:55:00 AM
Thank you so much, Andrea, I greatly appreciate the kind words! :o) <3
Date: 12/14/2019 7:05:00 PM
What you say G I wholeheartedly agree, I guess I must know you well, I have 30 or so gifts from you!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/15/2019 3:34:00 AM
And I have a number from you, Brother ... many kind thanks as always, Sir John! :o)

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