Inventor

Inventor. ( Pleiades)

Ideas come real

Intensions escalate 

Into apprehension 

Intense euphoria 

Increase endorphins as

Invention finalised 

Inspected accepted.


26/02/2017.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Martin Avatar
March 4, 2017 at 11:55 AM
Probably several hundred lines of "patent rejected", "doesn't work" and "no one wants it"! Unusual theme capturing the emotions of invention. Congratulations! :-)
Pett Avatar
March 4, 2017 at 12:15 PM
Thank you very much Mark for reading and your kind comment.
Merryman Avatar
March 3, 2017 at 2:38 PM
Roy, great work portraying the emotions behind an inventor's work! Congrats! Blessings, Kim
Pett Avatar
March 3, 2017 at 3:05 PM
Thank you very much Kim for your very kind comment, and encouragement, thanks again, Roy.
Gupta Avatar
March 2, 2017 at 4:05 AM
Great ... congratulations on your win ...
Pett Avatar
March 2, 2017 at 5:27 AM
Thank you very much Probir, much appreciated.
Allison Avatar
March 1, 2017 at 5:35 PM
Loved the theme you chose Roy congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Pett Avatar
March 1, 2017 at 5:41 PM
Thank you very much Jan, you are very kind, enjoyed the competition, thanks again, Roy.
Dietrich Avatar
March 1, 2017 at 3:42 PM
Great theme, Roy. Congrats on your win.
Pett Avatar
March 1, 2017 at 4:33 PM
Thank you very much Andrea for your kind thoughts and support, Roy.
Andresen Avatar
March 1, 2017 at 3:28 AM
- Congratulations on your great win in Pleiades I contest, Roy :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Pett Avatar
March 1, 2017 at 3:42 AM
Thank you very much Anne-Lise I really appreciate your kind comments and support. Roy.
Roper Avatar
February 28, 2017 at 9:53 PM
Congratulations on your win, Roy, well done :)
Pett Avatar
March 1, 2017 at 2:39 AM
Thank you very much Eve, your so kind.
Andresen Avatar
February 26, 2017 at 11:52 AM
- Lovely pleiades, Roy - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Pett Avatar
February 26, 2017 at 2:32 PM
Thank you very much Anne-Lise for your very kind comment, I really appreciate your support and encouragement.
Turner Avatar
February 26, 2017 at 8:51 AM
Another great pleiades, Roy:) Good luck!
Pett Avatar
February 26, 2017 at 9:54 AM
Thank you very much Daniel for your support and generosity.
Gupta Avatar
February 26, 2017 at 5:54 AM
Very true ... and beautifully said too in a nice Pleiades ...
Pett Avatar
February 26, 2017 at 6:12 AM
Thank you very much Probir for your very kind comment and support much appreciated, thanks again, Roy.
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