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Invasion From the Stars

Once i stood at the peak of mount seleya Observing the red sun and dry winds of the Vulcan homeworld Surveying the vast desert land in a cloud of dust Silently wishing in my heart that it would rain That the dry winds of the north would cease And usher in a few minutes of the rain Suddenly a tremor hit me hard It was so hard that i could barely stand At first i thought it was an invisible force But then, i realised it was an invasion Droplets of rain from the southern hemisphere Came riding on horses like a calvary First as a drizzle with a gentle breeze Then it became so cold and chilly That the spatering rain froze to sleet I thought that it might snow Alas! it was too cold to snow The lands hunkered in the freezing darkness I strayed into some caves to pass the night Earnestly anticipating an end to the storm Scarcely prepared to survive till morning But this time,morning may never come As the invasion lasted long into the night It kept me stranded in some rocky caves Then stopped abruptly as it had began I was thanking my stars Only for it to return with a thousand legions of soldiers It was an invasion like no other The waves increased in amplitude The rain increased in intensity Huge drops hit with perceptible force Like stone pebbles on a corrugated roof All of a sudden i was back on Mt seleya Staring wide into the dry and dusty desert Wondering where it had rained Then i realised it all happen in my imagination It was an impossible wish come true Just when i thought i had seen it all Slowly it faded unrecoverable As the faint memory of a dream First it was an invasion from the stars At the end, it became a vision A dream of the stars. OLANIYAN ISRAEL An imagination of rain on VULCAN home world.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 9/14/2013 7:20:00 PM
Israel, CONGRATULATIONS, on having your poem FEATURED on the soups Home Page:-). Good-Night **Linda**
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Israel Olaniyan
Date: 9/17/2013 1:33:00 PM
Thanks a bunch!Your commendation will definitely encourage me to be better.
Date: 9/11/2013 2:39:00 AM
i love each line of this poem,,,, each line calls out for the other,,,,, and how the last line takes us to reallity,,, ,,,,,
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Israel Olaniyan
Date: 9/17/2013 1:37:00 PM
Thats the whole idea surrounding the poem.Fantasy and finally reality. Thanks for the comment.Really appreciate
Date: 9/7/2013 4:02:00 PM
Welcome to the Soup I srael. Live long and prosper. Read all your writes and enjoyed them. Keep them coming. God Bless. D.
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Israel Olaniyan
Date: 9/17/2013 1:30:00 PM
Thanks a lot dave.I really appreciate comments from veterans like you.
Date: 9/5/2013 7:25:00 AM
Welcome to P-Soup, Israel ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours. - My first greeting to you from Norway / / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/5/2013 7:18:00 AM
Israel, Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* Skat *
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Date: 9/5/2013 6:57:00 AM
Good morning Israel, lovely message.. , thank you for expressing your write and finding this site. -A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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