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Tell me clearly How you feel Let me know If it's really real Tell me outright What's the deal But as you do Don't tell me NO. This confusion Confusing me Making me wonder What's meant to be Trying to figure out When 'I' will be 'we' But all the time hoping It will never be NEVER. So, what is it Where do we go I'm seeking an answer I need to know What do we have here Will it grow Please respond But please don't say NO.

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Date: 2/24/2016 6:32:00 PM
Lina, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 1/4/2016 12:00:00 AM
LINA, enjoyed reading your poem. Hugs **SKAT**
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Date: 8/9/2013 6:11:00 AM
Restrictive covenant? We are reading, please upload some more.
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Date: 2/15/2013 4:12:00 AM
Well thought and crafted!
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Date: 8/7/2012 4:49:00 PM
Inspiring!!!
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Date: 4/28/2011 2:51:00 AM
Nicely created poem, with a feeling of unease that is conveyed convincingly.
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Date: 4/27/2011 4:39:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Lina. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Date: 4/26/2011 11:21:00 AM
Very nice poem...welcome to PS...Jimmy
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