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June 9, 2025houghth

For the contest, "Pick a Title, Vol. 52, "Intrusive Thoughts"  by Edward Ibeh

Often quiet evenings, when I read, Memories of you softly intrude Times when you were my only need Heady days of a love we pursued and saw only in glasses rose hued. Thoughts surface I wish would move on, as unknown others invade my sleep. They are interlopers, quickly spawned, spreading fantasies that grow and creep, like tangled vines invading my sleep. Dreams of you lie easy on my eyes memories tossed and tumbled with time. Although the past may wear a disguise discarding thoughts we'd like to decline I like thoughts of you caressing mine Memories are stored of long-ago past, as your sweet face invades my mind with sunshine days that will always last. They're a treasure we happened to find while intrusive thoughts are left behind.

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Date: 6/12/2025 9:10:00 PM
Your poem is lovely with the memories of the dear one always invading your mind, during sleep and when awake. True love will stay on. At times interlopers will surface to take his place. But his face and the sunshine days with him will always last. All the Best dear Anne.
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Ann Peck
Date: 6/24/2025 2:21:00 PM
Thank you, dear Valsa. Your comments are always so beautiful

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