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Intuision

Trusting your instincts relying on your initiative If you have to make that split second decision Though mixed messages at time's not intuitive Can quit often leave one in an awkward position Is wisdom strength, guess depends on intension Being a doa rather than a thinker, less attentive Perhaps its though down to a particular situation Acting on impulse or naturally, being aggressive Or perhaps it's being choose, being a bit selective It's easy giving advice but also it's choosing to listen If you want to take it on board, it's showing incentive Swallowing your pride, shedding your every inhibition Though I've never been someone who's uninquisitive I'm always questioning things I guess looking for reason But going against my better judgment, not so instinctive If only I could trust my instincts and just follow my intuition ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, NOTE TO READERS JUST TWEEKED A LITTLE LAST COUPLE OF LINES ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, AGAIN INSPERATION CAME FROM ALL THE SUPER COOL SOUP POETS THANKYOU XXXXXXX THIS TOOK QUIT A WHILE TO PUT TOGEATHER I STARTED THE BACK END OF LAST YEAR SO MUCH GOING ON AT TIME I WANTED TO GIVE MENING AN A BIT OF DEPH BUT STILL KEEP IT SIMPLE MY MESAGE HERE IS I SUPOSE NOT ALWAYS LISTENING TO OTHERS STILL IF YOU KNOW YOUR RIGHT LEARNING TO BITE YOUR TOUGE THIS IB DONE IN THE SAME CONTEXT AS FATE AND COURIOSITY WHCH I CONCIDER TO BE MORE STRUCTURE AND OF GREATER IMPORTANCE I ALSO FEEL I WROTE THIS NOT JUST ON MY EXSPERANECS BUT ALSO Wanted to be FOR EVERYONE OUT THERE INSPIERD BYOTHER SOUP MEMBERS AND SELF WRITTEN BY MY SELF DAVIDSCOTT BETWEEN SEPT 2012 AND MARCH 2013,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, note help me if you can with fith line the word aspiration dose it fit dont know?? probably make no sense

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Date: 10/31/2013 5:30:00 AM
Enjoyed your wonderful poem David, I think it's good to question everything, as for biting ones tongue I find if we keep doing that we will have no voice,I tend to follow my instinct. love Elizabeth
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Date: 10/22/2013 4:59:00 AM
A thoughtprovokin poem! Pennd in an inspirin fabulous rhymin pattern. Yeah easy to giv advice but to folow it aint piece of cake true.
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Date: 10/17/2013 1:23:00 PM
wow, like my Fencing poem..i can relate here.. David... I will come back here tonight... always..LINDA
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