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Intrusive Thoughts

Written: June 07, 2025, for contest Sponsored by: Edward Ibeh ******************** The Phantom Choir In the quiescence of last Sunday, Prophecy heralded the hour past two, I heard a whisper at hibiscus dawn— a seamless voice I swore I always knew. In blissful flutter—it said night was wide, Chrysalis sorrow stirs a bed for fools, that in the hush, when hearts collide, The lost willows are left to wade in pools. Facing the kernel until the street thinned, And my shadow’s sepals bled away, Rusted voice strings within me spoke again— It's hymn frills poised for slow decay. The Hollow Pact Will I wake to descry my cracked mind, emptied of all its sharpened teeth? Will murky echoes break their binds, Or gnaw beneath the sheath? The alchemy battle sparks, but I am dust— wispy strands, a soldier tied in flimsy chains. Each idea erodes the periwinkle ones I trust, while the weight of stress remains. You graze me with a maze—why do I stand so still? Resurrection of the soul—so why shake your hands? But dread can have its way to fulfill— The transcendence of love is lost in vicious demands. The Third Mourning Wise chakras buried beneath the walls I built, the zen voice still scrawls its wordless plea. It concedes my yantra’s vulnerability, my guilt, peers where peacock pleadings wane into a spree. It hums inside the tremors of sapphire light, I close my eyes as it runs over lily-filled shorelines. Bits of lunar-glazed silver dust grow in quiet nights, and procrastinated pledges become lies. In my dour dreams, it tells me not to resist— “You know that silken shivers favor sound.” Amid cyan azure peace, I learn misery persists, for flickers of love fear the burial mound. The Acoustic Waltz In nocturnal dryness—sing soft verses in the dark, claims the enamored inked words are not hers. She plucks cerulean hymns without leaving a mark, The tune of her carved kohl was lost in slurs. She sways in the russet yarns of neon glow, bows beneath the ricochet’s wild haze— a phantom waltz in katabatic motion, moving slow. a cosmic voice garden, too faint to truly be a maze. Her pocket holds a ring of black gem glass, won as a child’s dare, a piece of smitten ink. She warms it, sighs, and watches it pass through flaming flecks—hands that fight to sink.

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Date: 6/15/2025 11:17:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your creative/wonderful "Intrusive Thoughts" write. Have a Blessed Day with your Win.......
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Date: 6/15/2025 4:09:00 AM
Congratulations poet friend on your top win with a masterly poem depicting intrusive thoughts that graze within. Particularly liked the stanza "Wise chakras buried beneath the walls I built, the zen voice still scrawls its wordless plea. It concedes my yantra’s vulnerability, my guilt, peers where peacock pleadings wane into a spree." So skilfully penned with depth of thoughts. Wishing you a cheerful day.
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Date: 6/14/2025 8:39:00 PM
Very Very Very nice. Big Congrats to win First Place
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Date: 6/14/2025 4:51:00 PM
Wow, what a stunning, unique piece, Lasaad. Each chapter is a great read. I'm just in awe of your writing prowess; your vocabulary is unmatched. Heartiest congratulations on your top win in my contest!
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