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Introduction

something awry all over
cant go on like this forever
the ways of survival of our quality of water
whine and ale
the scene to solve the situation
and the chaos of the intoxication
we caved to survive
finaly accomplished logic amidst our stupor
showcase it for everyone to make something useful out of the experience

interlude curtians reopen scene two
things improved

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/4/2010 3:34:00 PM
Glad that scene two finally showed up ...Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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