Intoxication

Your warm bodys heat flows,
through me like strong wine,
Being intoxicated by you,
I may not sober.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Loving Iii Avatar
January 31, 2011 at 2:34 PM
may as well get something out of being so close. jhl
Ruebel Avatar
January 24, 2011 at 1:33 PM
Hello Sarah, Congratulations on your wonderful win! It is very spicy.... As Always, Shar
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January 23, 2011 at 4:06 PM
Sarah, A late Congratulation~ on your win in Michael's hot contest,..p.d.
Brown Avatar
January 23, 2011 at 8:26 AM
Congratulations Sarah, on your win in the "Spicy" contest sponsored by Michael. Love, Carol
Pettit Avatar
January 22, 2011 at 7:17 PM
You have described a nice way to get pie-eyed. Congratulations on your win.
Kendrick Avatar
January 22, 2011 at 3:06 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
Dietrich Avatar
January 22, 2011 at 1:28 PM
wow, that last line with this one is so awesome. Congrats on your win with this wonderful spicy mix! Luv, Andrea
Onclaud Avatar
January 22, 2011 at 9:40 AM
oh sarah, to be drunk wit passion!! CHEERS for the great win..:) hugggs , nette
Neels Avatar
January 22, 2011 at 9:21 AM
Sarah it might be better to remain intoxicated ;-) congratulations on your win in MF'S contest
Sweetheart Avatar
January 22, 2011 at 6:12 AM
Congrats Sarah on your super win in the Spicy for ladies only contest with this wonderful write and win.. enjoy with luv..
Falotico Avatar
January 22, 2011 at 6:07 AM
Congrats and thank you for supporting my first contest....Michael
Calhoun Avatar
January 22, 2011 at 6:03 AM
Hi Sarah - Congratulations on your BIG WIN in the "SPICY" contest. Best wishes, KC
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January 10, 2011 at 7:28 PM
I was being literal, not sarcastic. I really do like this piece, I feel it rather than know it though. I like it for that! Keep it up :)
Wilson Avatar
January 10, 2011 at 3:49 PM
I like the sensuality of this..love,Deb
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January 10, 2011 at 1:39 PM
I cannot and will not claim to understand this poem, though I know the immediate message; Keep it up!
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