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Cleopetra

Intoxicating Poison

Beauty bows and surrenders at her bare feet,
The gold glitters jealous of her glowing skin,
Her bright eyes light embers of passion within,
                             Men yield to her will!

Warriors clang their weapons to fight to die,
Flags with horseman fly, write history again,
While sat in emerald throne, she rules their minds,
                                With potion of love!

Is there a poison more deadly than such love?
A woman to whom the Roman empire bows,
Juice of poison berry* she put in own eyes,
                           He who loves her - dies!

Mighty Caesar or Anthony were like clay,
Their tirades, history fade in her presence,
They lost in war, lost in her love, end by knife,
                           She put Asp to breast!


Sapphic stanza Poetry contest
Sponsor Edward Ibez
Date 08/July/2020

Cleopetra used poisonous  berries or the deadly nightshade juice( medicinal name Atropa belladonna) that yields Atropine which causes dilatation of the pupils. Was used in her time to make the eyes dreamy, innocent and beautiful! Hence the name “Bella = lady, Donna= beautiful)
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Mishra Avatar
July 27, 2020 at 11:51 AM
I like how you portrayed an intricate picture of Cleopetra's history. There are so many stories I've read and each one seems truer than the previous one. Your muse paints that deep reality again. Congratulations on your win Krish! :)
Radhakrishna Avatar
July 27, 2020 at 12:39 PM
Thanks Aditi! That’s a compliment I shall cherish!
Inman Avatar
July 22, 2020 at 6:23 PM
Both informative and well thought out, Krish.
Radhakrishna Avatar
July 22, 2020 at 9:45 PM
Thanks James. The mysteries of the past eras! A lot to learn from!
Allison Avatar
July 22, 2020 at 5:08 PM
what an informative poem Krish and i love the pic, many congrats on your win :-) hugs Jan xx
Radhakrishna Avatar
July 22, 2020 at 9:45 PM
Jan Thanks very much. Lizzy was the prettiest Cleo! yes, that phase of history one of the most memorable. Made more popular by Shakespeare!
Ibeh Avatar
July 22, 2020 at 11:06 AM
A beautifully written poem on the Cleopatra theme, Krish:-) I enjoyed it. Congratulations on your win in my contest!
Radhakrishna Avatar
July 22, 2020 at 11:32 AM
Thank you Edward! Pleased with the theme and the many lovely poems it has generated! Kind regards
Lindley Avatar
July 18, 2020 at 9:17 AM
A beauty of originality and purpose. A gem that seeds mind's eye to reality and mankind's too oft shallowness, greed, lusts and vanities. Ever seeking to grab onto beauty to do as it pleases. Programmed genetic coding in males to entice propagation. A fav.. God bless..
Radhakrishna Avatar
July 18, 2020 at 10:46 AM
Thank you Robert for reading and your very kind comments! Honoured you fav it!! Regards
Mcintosh Avatar
July 10, 2020 at 5:54 AM
A awesome write, dear friend. Blessings sent your way
Radhakrishna Avatar
July 10, 2020 at 7:11 AM
Thanks Gina! Your kind words, always a pleasure! Regards Krish
Wolf Avatar
July 9, 2020 at 5:51 PM
Well-penned, Krish!... btw: Always funny to me that Liz Taylor was Cleopatra. She was so quintessentially American. lol. Thanks, Gershon
Radhakrishna Avatar
July 10, 2020 at 12:20 AM
Thanks! Yes you are right! But there is no picture of Cleopetra that comes close to Lizzy! She was stunning in that movie!! Richard Burton was no doubt madly in love with her!!
Cunningham Avatar
July 9, 2020 at 1:20 PM
Well written Krish, love the inclusion of roman history. Good luck in the contest Tom
Radhakrishna Avatar
July 9, 2020 at 2:41 PM
Thanks Tom. An interesting format. Have admired that part of Roman history. :) Regards
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