Into Your Wild World

 I climb down into your wild world
Into a nectared dream 
Of love's insatiable kiss
Where your hands like buds extend
To the naked glass of heaven
Like slender stalks
Clasped upon spring's sweet breath
In the first smile of the sun
When sad the creeping hours 
Would starve me of the liquid
Kiss of your presence.
With a savage look
Of carnal longing
I plunge
Into the deep deep sea
Of your sovereign formed existence
Succulent as wild cherries
In nature's sacred chambers.

I climb down into your wild world
By the leaping fountain sprays
Ravenous, pure, untamed
When sultry stars would bleed
On beauty's charming lips
That in your comely charms 
My joyful spirit wept
Among the dead leaves
Of barren silence
I toil in blind solitude
As if you're gone far away
Far far away
Into the moonless east
Into the wide wide arms
Of A foreign land
That our eyes may never meet
Though my heart recites your face
With a thousand eyes.  

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 3/24/2014 4:46:00 PM
Superb use of vivid, visionary imagery . Also, you employ enjambment excellently. My favorite lines are: "Though my heart recites your face / With a thousand eyes."
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Date: 3/12/2014 4:10:00 PM
this is totally gorgeous Dear MM I have missed you so romantic love it love and hugs
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Date: 3/10/2014 7:11:00 AM
- Really beautiful, soft and romantic written Mustapha - Beautiful imagery ... love it !!!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/7/2014 1:27:00 PM
ohh, a passionate and tender write.. the flow flawless' like slender stalks.'.. you leave me breathless!.. huggs
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Date: 3/5/2014 9:29:00 PM
Mustapha, so beautiful. Romantically, a pleasure to read.... SKAT
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Date: 3/4/2014 10:56:00 PM
Wow! I love the way you described your deep feelings towards this person. Then, took the story into the opposite direction with your feelings of loneliness and longing. You have a wonderful way of toying with the reader's emotions. Another excellent poem from you, my friend, Mustapha!
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Date: 3/4/2014 9:07:00 AM
you heat up my screen with such flaming desire, mus.. i go wow!.. beautfiul!.. huggs
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Date: 3/4/2014 6:34:00 AM
This one screams with romance and passionate longing. The imagery is amazing.
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Date: 3/3/2014 10:29:00 PM
My heart recites your face..with a thousand eyes...makes a girls heart stop...this is so beautiful Mustapha ...what a lucky love....you're the king of romance here...awesome...
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Date: 3/3/2014 2:51:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your very expressive and descriptive work..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Thanks for the visit to my page..Your comments uplift..Sara
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Mustapha Mohammed
Date: 3/4/2014 5:12:00 AM
Thank you Sara for your wonderful comment. It was indeed a pleasure as always to stop by on your poem page with my honest feedback. Wishing you a wonderful day ahead.
Date: 3/3/2014 12:41:00 PM
This is so so beautiful, Mustapha. I'm glad to come back to read your romantic writes. This is very sensual and deep and sweet and amazing.....and..I could go on. Lovely...Great job
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Mustapha Mohammed
Date: 3/4/2014 5:10:00 AM
Hi Eileen, you're not alone with the now come back thing...lol. I've been away from P.S myself and will be stepping away from I soon again. But I must catch up on the amazing stuff that you as well as others have to offer. Thanks for your wonderful comment and I do hope that all is well with you : )
Date: 3/3/2014 7:33:00 AM
Straight to my favourites. So so beautiful this is..Hope you keep posting such treasures.
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Mustapha Mohammed
Date: 3/3/2014 11:13:00 AM
This is a poem that holds great sentimental value to me among all I've written so far. At first I was a bit skeptical to share this with anyone. But I just decided to this morning. I'm glad that you liked it, will be posting some more of my personal poems in the future. Hugs and I hope you are keeping well..Merci
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