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Into the woods she walks, the autumn sprinkled path wearing a red hooded cape; moving warily as she sings nervously following the footpath. Her worries of running into something beastly. Wearing a red hooded cape; moving warily she hears the amber leaves crackling under her feet. Her worries of running into something beastly. Spinning flicker, flutter leaves echo tempest beat. She hears the amber leaves crackling under her feet. Flapping of wings as frighten birds quickly take flight. Spinning flicker, flutter leaves echo tempest beat, drowns her quietness casting shadowed forms in sight. Flapping of wings as frighten birds quickly take flight. She quickens her steps and made her way to the end. Drowns her quietness casting shadowed forms in sight. Left behind, quiescence of lulls spell, time mewl spend. She quickens her steps and made her way to the end as she sings nervously following the footpath. Left behind, quiescence of lulls spell, time mewl spend. Into the woods she walks, the autumn sprinkled path. 1/9/2019 Rhyme & Pantoum

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Date: 12/19/2019 7:58:00 PM
Glad I finally saw this lovely example of a pantoum from you. I thought of Red Riding Hood as I read it. Very cool, Eve. oh and I see it won a contest. Congratulations.
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Date: 11/22/2019 11:19:00 AM
Eve, this is truly lovely and congratulations on your great win and a great example for your contest, putting on my thinking hat to write you something worthy !
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Date: 11/21/2019 7:28:00 AM
Very nicely penned Eve, best wishes
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Date: 1/19/2019 1:19:00 PM
A fine write Eve, much enjoyed. Congrats, :)
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Date: 1/14/2019 5:17:00 PM
Wow, such a beautifully-written Pantoum, Eve! A fascinating write, and congratulations on your fine First Place win. Hugs, Sandra
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Eve Roper
Date: 1/16/2019 3:47:00 PM
thank you dear friend, :). Hugs Eve ~`*
Date: 1/14/2019 11:44:00 AM
Great pantoum for a good win. /blessings, Janis
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Date: 1/16/2019 3:47:00 PM
Janis, thank you :). Hugs Eve ~`*
Date: 1/13/2019 9:20:00 AM
Great Pantoum Eve..Congrats on your win..
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Date: 1/16/2019 3:46:00 PM
Joseph, thank you dear friend, :). Hugs Eve ~`*
Date: 1/13/2019 7:46:00 AM
Hi Eve, I love the Pantoum form and you did it justice my friend. You told a beautiful story. It put me in the mind of" little red riding hood". Congratulations on your 1st place win. It was deserved:-) Alexis
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Date: 1/16/2019 3:46:00 PM
Alexis, thank you :). Hugs Eve ~`*
Date: 1/13/2019 7:23:00 AM
I love a good pantoum and you constructed one which tells a story and had great flow and rhyme to it.. Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
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Eve Roper
Date: 1/16/2019 3:46:00 PM
Dear friend, thank you :). Hugs Eve ~`*
Date: 1/10/2019 2:26:00 AM
A challenging form to master Eve. Very well done! It is more than I can muster. Best for a win. : ) xxoo
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Date: 1/16/2019 3:45:00 PM
thank you dear friend, :). Hugs Eve ~`*
Date: 1/9/2019 1:53:00 PM
i feel the sense of mystery in your lines, eve... fascinating write... thanks for the blog; much honored!..huggs
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Date: 1/16/2019 3:44:00 PM
Dear friend, thank you:). Hugs Eve ~`*
Date: 1/9/2019 1:48:00 PM
Well written Eve, a form I struggle with. Tom.
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Date: 1/16/2019 3:43:00 PM
Dear friend, thank you for dropping by and commenting on my poem:). Hugs Eve ~`*
Date: 1/9/2019 1:46:00 PM
Very nice poem! I thoroughly enjoyed reading it.
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Date: 1/16/2019 3:43:00 PM
Valerie, thank you for dropping by and commenting on my poem:). Hugs Eve ~`*

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