Into the Woods

A narrow path heading off into the woods
enticed me from familiar road, that afternoon.
A startled fawn dashed by me without sound, 
the silence disturbed only by unknown bird’s sweet tune. 

Why had I not noticed this lovely place before,
passing by it daily on my habitual jog?
I admired  its natural beauty as carefully
I arranged my heavy jacket for seat by fallen log.

I opened virgin pages of my poetry notebook,
expecting  inspiration to fill them to the brim.
I looked for the caroler whose notes had filled the air. 
Other birds had gathered, singing along with him.

The air was still and warm. I could feel my eyelids droop,
and could hear the droning of a hundred thousand bees. 
I laid my head upon the log, as soft as feather bed,
in perfection of the moment, I threw worries to the breeze.

Jerking suddenly awake, I saw the sun had dimmed.
It was much lower in the sky, for dinner I’d be late.
My family would be hungry and perhaps a little worried.
They knew it was unlike me to ever make them wait.

Much to my astonishment, my notebook had been filled,
while I could not remember writing a solitary line.
There were poems with pretty phrases and delightful metaphors.
I recognized not one of them, the writing wasn’t mine.

The next morning on my jog, I looked for the pretty place,
but simply couldn’t find it though I slowed my walk to see.
I have my well-filled notebook to prove that it was there,
the little bit of Heaven that was once revealed to me.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Mcguire Avatar
March 14, 2019 at 8:27 PM
Fabulous poem Joyce! Great story. If you get a chance read my poem " A walk in the wood "
Roper Avatar
January 19, 2019 at 11:35 AM
Congratulations on your win,Joyce, on a great descriptive and well written poem . :). Hugs Eve ~`*
One Avatar
January 13, 2019 at 9:36 AM
Lovely piem Joyce.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
May Avatar
January 13, 2019 at 9:27 AM
Beautifully enchanting Joyce..Congrats on your win..
Y. Avatar
January 13, 2019 at 8:32 AM
Hi Joyce. Congratulations on your fine win the contest. It well deserved:-) Alexis
La France Avatar
June 12, 2011 at 6:15 PM
Joyce this poem is just beautiful, I am so sorry it did not get into my contest for it would be a winner for sure, did you forget to enter it,( I've done that) or did it disappear? I also carry a notebook with me everywhere, these notebooks are filled with fragmented thoughts and ideas and poem layouts and just things I think of.. I love to just sit sometimes and read through my journals~~
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June 10, 2011 at 9:29 AM
The poems just wrote themselves when you were inspired by all this natural beauty, Joyce. Sure would have loved to share this "bit of Heaven" with you. Exquisite entry for the contest. Wishing you success! Love, Carolyn
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June 10, 2011 at 5:12 AM
this is wonderfully written, cory
Henderson Avatar
June 9, 2011 at 9:56 PM
very nicely done Joyce. You had me disappointed that you could not find it again.
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