Into the Woods

Into the woods daffodils bloom
in varied colours and shapes ;
Trumpets in golden hue and pink jonquils 
that radiate in dappled sunlight.

All of a sudden, it drizzles~
and a rainbow comes descending 
kissing each tiny petal that opens~
Oh, my heart feels delight 
as I see the trees waltzing 
as the rainbow bends to kiss me, too.

15 March 2022

Form I - Imagism-New Poem Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Constance La France

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2nd place

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Date: 12/14/2022 7:50:00 AM
beautiful ~
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Date: 4/9/2022 12:34:00 AM
Gorgeous metaphoric write JCB
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Date: 3/25/2022 6:55:00 PM
Dear JCB, the enchantment of your beautiful imagery brings me to the center of this vibrant yet serene scene. Oh! To be kissed by a rainbow.. such a magical thought. Splendor spills from your captivating pen, my inspiring friend. Congratulations for your excellent win in Constance’s contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 3/19/2022 8:24:00 AM
JCB, congratulations on your win in my Imagism contest with your wonderful poem full of imagery ~Constance
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Date: 3/16/2022 3:50:00 PM
Hello JCB Brul, A lot of plants ferns and trees grow in the woods. Love this poem. Hugs.
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Date: 3/16/2022 1:35:00 AM
It seems, now you are surrounded by Daffodils . Another beautiful poem on Daffodils !
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Date: 3/15/2022 8:26:00 PM
Loved the imagery!
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