Into the Wedge

There are some things, we will never forget


....

the sound of a phone call, still rings in my ears
squeezing my chest.....squeezing my chest...

A sun sinking low, into the west
along with my heart
under a blood-crested sky

as we drove into the wedge of dusk
on the edge of our seats
in a frozen state 
on that icy slope
I was holding my breath in the liquid silence
coping........not coping
engaging in warfare
of knowing, without really knowing
how to hope, ...or what to hope for

but deep down
already knowing, the war was over...

my torso was rocking
without my control......forward and backwards
a life of it's own
a balm for raw nerves, I couldn't calm down
something to do, something to do
knowing, but not knowing
be hopeful, or be resigned?
coping? not well
 ...knowing, but not knowing

yet, somehow fearing
the war was over....

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on that night that would change all...

he clung to the wheel......I clung to the seat
we clung to our prayers, but what was done, will be done...
what is gone.....will be gone

as we drove into the wedge of night
watching the moon replace the sun without remorse
we stayed on course, without a word between us said
but a slither of light on the horizon
filling my head with visions of birds on the wing
flying into the clouds
like a sign
as a shroud
taking my eyes
taking my hope
taking the doubt
taking instead
my own resistance
to what I already knew
it all
meant

what was done....will be done
what is gone....will be gone
losing hope....is losing hope
the war was over...

what is left 
we must accept




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July 28, 2016 at 9:55 PM
Thanks for the narrative write, Carrie, Congratulations on your awesome win in my "Premiere Contest." Enjoy the few words I left on my blog. Forever *SKAT*
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February 16, 2015 at 12:18 AM
Carrie, CONGRATS on your win ~ SKAT ~
Chakrabarty Avatar
February 12, 2015 at 9:35 AM
Congratulations on your lovely win Carrie. God bless-Rajat
Carmack Avatar
February 12, 2015 at 5:33 AM
Sometimes it doesn't feel like anything is left at all. Thank you for supporting my contest, and congrats.
A. Sharma Avatar
February 12, 2015 at 4:35 AM
U hv that power of words Carrie! Exquisite write,, congrats on big win!
Deschler Avatar
January 31, 2014 at 7:14 PM
This poem is quite suspenseful and powerful. I found myself reading faster and faster, because I wanted to see what was going to happen at the end. An excellent write, Carrie! Congratulations on your win!
Onclaud Avatar
January 29, 2014 at 4:51 PM
i was hooked all the way, carrie.. the anticipation of what could happen next is mind blowing... tremendous piece, carrie!,, huggs
Eastman Avatar
January 29, 2014 at 4:49 PM
Congratulations on this win... It was building and moving...
Lamoureux Avatar
January 29, 2014 at 8:20 AM
You had me from start to finish. I just love this poem.congratulations.
Mehta Avatar
January 29, 2014 at 6:27 AM
Wonderful poem and congrats on the fine win, Carrie
Hamilton Avatar
January 29, 2014 at 5:42 AM
very deep and soul searching Carrie expertly pen congrats on win Shadow x smile hug
Tsiluma Avatar
January 29, 2014 at 3:09 AM
Excellently penned Carrie! I love how the events develop and the sentiments expressed. It's good to keep hope alive but when it comes to let go, we should have the courage to let go. You've said it best.
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June 22, 2013 at 8:07 AM
Congrats, Carrie, on this very moving piece...the torso rocking is so me! Can't keep still when I'm nervous! What an amazing theme this was on as well. War....what is left, we must accept..with His grace we move on! :) Thanks for your visits to my work. Hugs
Thomas Avatar
June 21, 2013 at 9:17 PM
Congratulations carrie, wonderful write :) really enjoyed .....ty4 sharing
Mandani Avatar
June 21, 2013 at 6:57 PM
Nice!
Nair Avatar
June 21, 2013 at 6:11 PM
Captivating, smoothly flowing, and intriguing, it is great, Congrats, Carrie!!
Delaney Avatar
June 21, 2013 at 6:02 PM
Congrats Carrie ....a wonderful piece...as Debbie says, "you are full of surprises.
Lamoureux Avatar
June 21, 2013 at 6:02 PM
Way to go Carrie, an exceptional piece.
Konos Avatar
June 21, 2013 at 5:38 PM
YOU GO GIRL.......
Gildersleeve Avatar
June 21, 2013 at 2:04 PM
Carrie I so love the message in your Narrative. A well deserve 1st place win. Congratulations on yor marvelous win. Warm Smiles, Connie
Guzzi Avatar
June 21, 2013 at 12:53 PM
I was so glad to see some one take the ball and run, I would never have guessed this was YOU and that means you are not a one trick pony! LOL Congrad's on Your WIN!
Ryerson Avatar
June 19, 2013 at 12:26 PM
Wow...'The wedge of night'...Perfect description...Great wisdom and insight displayed here, Carrie...especially the last two verses...Wow - Tim
Undertaker Avatar
June 18, 2013 at 10:12 PM
Its really great to read that. a risky ride has taught us a great value.
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