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Into the Sunset

into the sunset I watched him walking away as tears stained my face. . . was the sky too beautiful for him to look back at me? Written 5/12/14

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 6/7/2019 10:47:00 PM
Wow - powerful, Andrea. A FAVE for me. Congrats on your podium finish.
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Date: 6/4/2019 10:58:00 PM
Ahhh lovely Andrea. Congratulations on your third placement! : )
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Date: 6/4/2019 8:31:00 PM
I was captivated by the poignant beauty of your Tanka, Andrea. Congratulations on your excellent win with this evocative and emotive piece. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
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Date: 6/4/2019 3:44:00 AM
Such a warm thought expressed so simply
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Date: 6/4/2019 12:23:00 AM
Such a beautiful yet touching poem Andrea I adore it, and many congrats for your win! With kindest thoughts Ann xx - A FAV for me!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 6/4/2019 4:01:00 PM
wow, I am glad you liked it so much! thank you.
Date: 5/26/2014 2:09:00 AM
great write Andrea ;)
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Date: 5/22/2014 6:51:00 PM
or was it too painful to look back on such a face? great write Andrea.
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Date: 5/19/2014 2:54:00 PM
The departing ponder of will he, will she. An image captured so many times historically. Nice one Andrea :)
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Date: 5/19/2014 9:24:00 AM
mellow, mellow ride into the sunset, andie.. huge congrats.. huggs
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Date: 5/18/2014 2:13:00 PM
oh, this one's powerful - a sure winner
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Date: 5/18/2014 11:31:00 AM
Very touching thoughts in this little poem ;) heartfelt
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Date: 5/17/2014 1:58:00 PM
Beautiful, Andrea, though a bit sad. Congratulations on your win! Carolyn
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Date: 5/17/2014 9:54:00 AM
This one was so sad, and beautiful ! Congrats to you Andrea.......(I messed up...and wrote free-verse......oops!!.....didn't see that requirement. I need better glasses...lol!!)
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Date: 5/17/2014 6:19:00 AM
Congrats on a gret win Andrea
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Date: 5/16/2014 10:15:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this little gem Andrea!
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Date: 5/16/2014 8:25:00 PM
If my guy was more interested in the sunset to take a glimpse back at me, I think I would begin looking for someone else. He may have been too shy. That would be my thought, in which he would be instantly forgiven. Haha Good poem!
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Date: 5/16/2014 3:32:00 PM
....WOW, lovely win Andrea! :-) Love Always, Keith
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Date: 5/16/2014 2:28:00 PM
Wow, does this give a tug at the heart. Congratulations, Andrea.
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Date: 5/16/2014 10:50:00 AM
Let's hope the bounder was not distracted by another woman. So sad. Love, daver
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Date: 5/16/2014 8:45:00 AM
So nice to sit next to you for a change..lol....beautiful work my dear. BG
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Date: 5/16/2014 8:00:00 AM
Wow, this captured a very intense moment and made it stand still in a reality that was felt by the reader.congratulations my friend on your win
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Date: 5/16/2014 5:12:00 AM
Lovely emotional write Andrea ! Congrats on top win!
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 5/16/2014 5:13:00 AM
Saying much in few words a real art !
Date: 5/16/2014 4:59:00 AM
Nice win Andrea... Congratulations! Verlena
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Date: 5/16/2014 4:11:00 AM
so happy to see you get 1st place in my contest Andrea ty for supporting it hugs
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Date: 5/15/2014 8:26:00 AM
What a beauty you have created Andrea like a wonderful painting with an innocent question revealing the love of your heart. It's a Gem my dear friend which has come from your pen and it would continue leave its impressions and light, whenever its reader would look towards the diminishing sky with a Sunset. The sweet question which you have asked would come on every God lover's lips. Great writes often comes the way you have sketched it. My good wishes for your contest entry. Your Poem deserves the 1st place. It goes as my fav. One. Love and best wishes always…Ravindra K Kapoor
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