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Into the Sunlight

In soft smooth tones I hear your words "I'm falling in love with you." Catching your breath I dive along into your sunset into your opened treasure, gentle rays of light In strengthened spiritual heart You continue to shower courage, hope and dreams "I'm falling in love with you." Feeling your words falling stars onto me onto my heartbeat, opening my solitary cage Fearing sun-setting moments when darkness take away sunlight I fear of leaving you when life leaves this body "I'm falling in love with you." Seeing myself becoming a shooting star a shining one in the sky, shining only for you In the dimness of my vision when all understanding is lost You stay still by my side "I'm falling in love with you." Simple words taking away my breath as I feel my soul flying to the Heavens a star in the night sky, when everything else is dark... ...You'll See Me Smiling At You... -------------------------- Inspired by 'The Fault in Our Stars' Poem created: 12th May 2014 For Poem Contest: Into the sunsets

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Date: 2/23/2016 9:14:00 PM
Lily, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 1/1/2016 1:12:00 PM
LILY, pleasure to read :) HAVE YOURSELF A HAPPY January 1st. ...... SKAT
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Date: 5/24/2014 7:03:00 PM
Thoroughly enjoyable read . Thanks for sharing .
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Lily Twinkle
Date: 6/4/2014 10:32:00 AM
Thank you Jadazzle for visiting. Thanks for reading ;) I like your screen name too!
Date: 5/19/2014 2:20:00 AM
Lily excellent lines and the refrain fits in very well....David
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Date: 5/22/2014 6:19:00 AM
Thank you David for such an insight to my poetry ;) Thanks for the visits!
Date: 5/18/2014 4:58:00 PM
this one is simply gorgeous. I have no idea how you placed in the contest, but wow, I bet you placed high!
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Lily Twinkle
Date: 5/22/2014 6:18:00 AM
Thank you Andrea for such kind words! It was a pleasant surprise to me too ;)
Date: 5/18/2014 1:25:00 AM
Hi Lily, I like how you put this all together and obviously so did the sponsor.. It's really good!! Congrats on your win!!
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Lily Twinkle
Date: 5/18/2014 11:01:00 AM
Wow! I just realized I got a very high score on this one! Thanks for commenting Dave ;)
Date: 5/17/2014 4:27:00 PM
I like this poem and I give it a high rating. won over by some lovely phrases (exp. "opening my solitary cage"). First time I'm reading your poetry; will visit again. // paul
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Lily Twinkle
Date: 5/18/2014 11:02:00 AM
Thank you Paul for commenting so kindly ;)
Date: 5/17/2014 2:04:00 PM
Dear Lily, such a beautiful poem. But don't be afraid of losing your beloved "when life leaves" his body. You will meet again on the spiritual realm. Congratulations on your win! Carolyn
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Lily Twinkle
Date: 5/18/2014 11:02:00 AM
Thank you Carolyn for your very kind words ;)
Date: 5/16/2014 2:50:00 PM
Beautiful, Lily. Congratulations!
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Lily Twinkle
Date: 5/18/2014 11:03:00 AM
Thanks Faye for stopping with your comment ;)
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Lily Twinkle
Date: 5/18/2014 11:03:00 AM
I mean 'stopping by' ...
Date: 5/16/2014 8:50:00 AM
A big score with this very lovely piece. Congrats. BG Your name is adorable.
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Lily Twinkle
Date: 5/18/2014 11:04:00 AM
Thanks Barbara for your kind words ;)
Date: 5/16/2014 5:27:00 AM
Splendid work here Lily ! Such a great write ,, loved ur writing style ! Congrats on huge win !
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Lily Twinkle
Date: 5/18/2014 11:05:00 AM
Thank you so much for your kind words ;) I'm pleasantly surprised with the huge win!
Date: 5/16/2014 4:20:00 AM
hi Lilly are you new to soup? if so a wonderful poem expect to see much from you and welcome to soup congrats on win hugs
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Lily Twinkle
Date: 5/18/2014 11:06:00 AM
Thanks Shadow for stopping by with your kind comment ;)
Date: 5/13/2014 4:42:00 PM
this poetry is so nice to read .. full of love and romantic feelings that is so joy to read.. Brooke
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Lily Twinkle
Date: 5/14/2014 9:08:00 AM
Thank you Brooke for stopping by with your kind words. I'm glad you enjoyed reading it!