Into the Passion

The wind is blowing And here, my skin is showing Standing in the heat Air rushing into weak pores I relish in the passion
Russell Sivey
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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August 26, 2012 at 5:18 PM
Russell, a nice sounding tanka,,,feels really smooth....always~PD
Horne Avatar
August 26, 2012 at 1:04 PM
clever write, my friend
Dietrich Avatar
August 26, 2012 at 10:54 AM
Interesting description of passion, my friend.
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August 25, 2012 at 9:21 PM
Good descriptive tanka for summer.
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