Into the Marsh

A dusty quiver lay on my back
Its arrows clean and sharp

I wade with purpose through itchy reeds
My boots dragging in the muck

I hear you before I see you
Your laugh collapsing the virgin marsh between us

A fistful of whites and yellows
My dear whites and yellows

Ready, steady
It’s no use!

For if I lose an arrow
My quiver will lighten 
And my shoulders will slouch
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Rodgers Avatar
November 22, 2023 at 7:26 AM
Sofia, your poem beautifully intertwines the physical journey through the marsh with the emotional journey of the narrator. The vivid imagery and the unexpected twist of the narrator’s change of mind make it captivating. - Blessings, Daniel
Agustin Avatar
September 10, 2023 at 8:56 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your wisdom through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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