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Into the Marsh

A dusty quiver lay on my back Its arrows clean and sharp I wade with purpose through itchy reeds My boots dragging in the muck I hear you before I see you Your laugh collapsing the virgin marsh between us A fistful of whites and yellows My dear whites and yellows Ready, steady It’s no use! For if I lose an arrow My quiver will lighten And my shoulders will slouch

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Date: 11/22/2023 7:26:00 AM
Sofia, your poem beautifully intertwines the physical journey through the marsh with the emotional journey of the narrator. The vivid imagery and the unexpected twist of the narrator’s change of mind make it captivating. - Blessings, Daniel
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Date: 9/10/2023 8:56:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your wisdom through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 9/8/2023 12:52:00 PM
Shoot the bloody thing! Or not. Nice poem Sofia
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