Barbara Gorelick Poet Quatrain

Into the Gloaming

Into the gloaming my stallion steps
His hooves beating homage to the day
Upon his back I go to meet the dark
My gown floating in beautiful disarray 

The night will cover soon the land
My steed will fade into my dreams
On pillows fashioned of silver thread
Sweet repose until the daylight gleams

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Skat A August 9, 2013 at 7:44 PM love it..........SKAT

Sara Kendrick August 9, 2013 at 10:54 AM Cute one..Got a chuckle..Very poetic winning work..Congrats..Sara

Richard Lamoureux August 9, 2013 at 6:37 AM Stunning, congratulations.

Andrea Dietrich August 9, 2013 at 1:14 AM this was short and oh so sweet!! Love the stallion dream image.. Big Congrats.

Poet Destroyer A August 8, 2013 at 9:50 PM a pretty poem... congrats...Linda

Debbie Duncan July 29, 2013 at 4:06 PM Love it ,,,, romance novel ;}

Mustapha Mohammed July 28, 2013 at 9:43 AM I think this imagery did it for me.A fine write.

Tim Ryerson July 27, 2013 at 3:07 AM Absolutely beautiful, Barbara...This is one of your best in my opinion...Hands down winner and staight to my favs! - Tim

Seren Roberts July 27, 2013 at 1:48 AM Loved it Barbara ....Seren

Richard Ferry July 26, 2013 at 11:41 PM great image..nicely said