Into the Fray

I have withstood this austere year
Waiting on skies which never clear
Shadows away

Fingers restless for an hour's peace
Scrapes gold flakes from a drying crease
of papier-mache

Random resistance too refined
Leisure, a luxury consigned
To yesterday

Now, tart impatience I require
Passive manners swiftly expire
Against delay

In rushing tempo, I rejoice
Straight-held shoulders, marching my voice
Into the fray

On stout cliffs, I refuse the same
Meek rain, in favor of bold flame
Where bright hopes lay.

7/31/20

For 'Tail Rhyme Stanza' contest
Sponsor: Emile Pinet

(a note on papier-mache: howmanysyllables has it as 3 syllables but in rhymezone.com it is listed under the four syllable words. I used the count from howmanysyllables.com, but to check it in rhymezone, it is under the four syllable count rhymes - just so there is no confusion.)
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Rose  Avatar
August 26, 2020 at 4:53 PM
Beautiful poem skillfully rendered congrats on your win dear Michelle.
Watt Avatar
August 26, 2020 at 1:52 PM
Back to congratulate for this excellent write. A perfect distillation of impactful words while losing none of the vibe or meaning. Well done, Michelle.
Kauffman Avatar
August 26, 2020 at 10:40 AM
This is a poem of poetic defiance, Michelle with so many strong word and image choices. Congratulations on your winning placement!
Balasubramanian Avatar
August 26, 2020 at 10:35 AM
Congratulations on your win. Take care. Warm regards. Rama
Ermine Avatar
August 26, 2020 at 8:42 AM
Michelle, an awesome win. Heart on sleeve speaks clearly, injects optimism going forward. Looking at the winning entries, you and others packed a lot of emotion into smallish form. A fabulous job. Congratulations!
Pinet Avatar
August 26, 2020 at 8:17 AM
Congratulations Michelle! Your poem earned a distinguished place in my contest, due to the demands of this form of poetry it was a difficult contest to judge, very well done my friend, Emile.
Canerdy Avatar
August 10, 2020 at 5:50 AM
Very descriptive and well-written, Michelle. Janice
Watt Avatar
August 5, 2020 at 10:01 PM
Is this the one you were working on when you wrote 'Dressing Up'?
Faulkner Avatar
August 7, 2020 at 11:54 AM
Good memory, and yes, it was!
Watt Avatar
August 5, 2020 at 9:59 PM
Do I read some of the Portland protests into this fantastic write? Even if not, it is a glorious manifesto of standing boldly for what is right and letting one's voice be heard. Brava, Michelle!
Faulkner Avatar
August 7, 2020 at 11:53 AM
Not specifically, but now that I think about it, I bet it influenced me subconsciously - very apt observation, John!
Wolf Avatar
August 2, 2020 at 8:08 PM
As with 'unencumbered,' so too with 'papier-mache' and 'shadows away:' Great rhyming, Michelle. Ole! ~ Senor Gershon
Faulkner Avatar
August 5, 2020 at 9:54 PM
That made my day :)
Krutsinger Avatar
July 31, 2020 at 4:06 PM
This is a beautiful write Michelle. It could win a lot of different contests. Good luck in Emile’s contest.
Faulkner Avatar
July 31, 2020 at 5:40 PM
Not sure how it will fare, but am glad for your kind comment and wishes, thank you, Caren!
Leffanta Avatar
July 31, 2020 at 2:47 PM
So "tart" is now the magic word? A well-thought-out combination of words, Michelle! Aloha! Rico
Leffanta Avatar
August 2, 2020 at 11:59 AM
Pregnant again? Aloha! Rico
Faulkner Avatar
July 31, 2020 at 5:39 PM
Actually, I think that came from my craving for key lime pie :)
Rose  Avatar
July 31, 2020 at 2:32 PM
You have a beautiful rhyming scheme here dear poetess, winning wishes are being sent. xo
Faulkner Avatar
July 31, 2020 at 5:37 PM
Thank you kindly, Pixie Dust, hope you blow some of that magic my way :)
Pigeon Tart Avatar
July 31, 2020 at 12:42 PM
I felt a building tension reading this, then your after note, blew it all away, made me giggle~ I pronounce papier-mâché with 5 syllables lol <3
Faulkner Avatar
July 31, 2020 at 9:13 PM
For me it's 4 syllables - glad we have a syllable counter to settle the debate!
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